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Some ponies are afraid of clowns. There's just something about them. Some don't understand why they're scary, or why others are afraid of them. Is it the fact they're a familiar shape, with an unfamiliar face?

Or perhaps it's something that some of them do... sometimes you can't even tell if they're truly clowns or not... they look like clowns... is this clown who we think he is?

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My attempt at a darker fic, based off of Stephen King's IT. It will remain a one-shot for now, but I'm willing to add more chapters to it, and so the status shall be Incomplete for the time being.

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:raritycry: my nightmares will return to me if i dare read this story...so reading this in the middle of the bucking night!!

Ffffffflllllllllloooooooooaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttt

I remember when I was first reading the book. Some scenes I found terrifying enough to close the book, throw it away and hide under the covers. Yeah, I was that scared. :raritycry: I'll stick around to see where this goes. :pinkiehappy:

I have to say I really enjoyed this story, the picture is what caught my attention, oh Pennywise, how I dread your name. Pennywise the Dancin' Clown, we remember how much fear you've brought into our lives. When I first read "Hi There" when Pennywise met Cobalt, I felt a cold chill, and especially when I saw this line. "Oh, very wise of your father, kid, very wise indeed! My name is Pennywise the Dancin' Clown! What's Yours?" This story was actually pretty well written, and had a nice pace. Even though I knew what was going to happen, it still felt quite unnerving. I did notice a typo in this sentence {And Rainbow Dash wasn't busy, and saw no harming in going too.} It should be harm instead of harming, unless you meant to have it that way. This is also the first fanfic I've read to have a video in it, I didn't even think that was possible. I'm not sure how everyone else will respond to this fanfic, but I give you a thumps up. And if you do have plans of continuing it, I may encourage you to do so.

1496661 Thanks for noticing the typo, I'll correct that. Glad I lived up to the reputation, I guess. And if you'd like it to continue, I'll get around to it soon.

And the picture kinda unintentionally lives up to Pennywise's reputation. Looks a bit comical and funny (The ruined childhood joke), but you can see there's something a bit wrong with what you're seeing.

If you believe such things. :pinkiecrazy:

on a scale of 1-10 i give this a butter!!!!!111one dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Trixie_lolface_1.png

on another note, did anyone hear about the fire at the circus? it was in-tentsdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png

1499213 I know that's a Pinkie Lolface... but it disturbs me a bit... :derpyderp2:

And... is a butter good? :fluttercry:

1499229
HOW DARE YOU EVER QUESTION THE ALL POWERFULNESS OF BUTTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!1111ONE
yes butter is good :derpytongue2:

good story very good indeed :moustache:

1499292 Goode. I'm working on chapter 2.

Ah, Pennywise. My old nemesis. We meet again.

Why doesn't fimfiction have a horror tag? :rainbowhuh:
Finding stories like this would be so much easier if it were.
Who is Penny gonna mess with next I wonder...?

Ah, the bleeding book... I almost managed to forget about that little bit.

The blood-filled balloons? Not so much...

1502546 Yeah they should have a horror tag.

I'm not for OC but I give a thumb up!

"It" is one of my favorite movies and books. I must say that you real caught the tone and style of the book and blended it perfectly with the movie version of Pennywise. Great job!

1505136 Thanks, I was hoping I'd make it work.

1505159
I'm serious. The movie is child's play compared to the book. What you did with Pinkie's scene is something the novel's Pennywise would do. I can't wait to see what you do with the other Mane Six, maybe you can even have Spike have an encounter with Pennywise.

1505217 Well... I'll try, but I have to try to get used to writing Spike, probably. I'll admit, I have difficulty with that. I even joke about that in my Deadpool fic.

Still, I'll keep your suggestion in mind.

cliff hangars suck i want the next one now and u should add more stuff that come from the book like have the mane six have a flash back of It before it came to ponyville that would make thing interesting :twilightsheepish:

i wonder whats the timeline is this after the book or an alternate timeline from the book?
and pennywise has made a mistake the mane 6 plus one will defeat him

1506000 It's kinda both...

This takes place after IT, where It died. He's basically just gone somewhere else in the Multiverse.

He is eternal, after all.

And maybe the Mane 6 will defeat him...

But has he made a mistake yet... :pinkiecrazy:

1505513 I took a while to think of things. So it's either tomorrow or tomorrow after that.

But rest assured, the other stories will be there.

Until now, have a complimentary balloon.

no keep that balloon away>>1506083

Hhhmmm...Rainbow's encounter reminds me of Ben's encounter from the movie. Rarity's reminds me of Mike's from the book. Like Mike, she was able to fight It off, and I don't mean that Mike simply escaped It's grasp, he actually chased It away when It took the form of a giant bird. Way to go, Rarity!

U should have Pennywise face off against discord

1513217 I don't like Rarity that much, really. The accent I like, but she just seems annoying sometimes with me. Seems like she's only generous if she has something to gain or lose. :facehoof: Still, I can't just make her stupid and useless simply because I don't like her. I don't hate her, I just sorta dislike her. And the encounters were kinda meant to be somewhat reminiscent of what happened before. Just reminiscent.

1513770 I'm not sure. I haven't ever written Discord, and I don't have any plans with him. And I'm not sure what I'd do with that.

i dont know why but
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1518585 What part do you mean?

Wasn't meant to be that hilarious...

Good to know I can have comedy unintentionally.

Also, I think I'll take a moment to say my Brain-Derp came back to haunt me.

I thought I published this about 2 hours ago, before I actually noticed I hadn't...
:derpyderp2::facehoof:

ehh nothing in particular, i find hilarity in just about everything, ill bite, i sometimes have to look at it from a completely different perspective.
i couldn't tell you what part i found hilarious though, i only brought it up cause when i finished reading i had the stupidest grin on my face for no reason and couldn't stop laughing dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png

1518688 I really want to reply to this comment with an image... but I'm reeally tired...

Tell you what... I'll get back to you in the morning.

And if you still care... The Recluse will update soon... I just needed ideas, and I only have a ridiculous one.

Be back in a matter of hours. Muahahahaha.

im really wondering if the elements of harmony will work on Pennywise

1521972 Well, that's the important thing.

y did live light come in the story

1529530 Because I like myself too much.

1530611 wut has gotten into u light :rainbowhuh:

1532732 ...

...

...I'm obviously getting too confident in myself...

That's... usually bad... :facehoof:

Sorry if I've accidentally offended you or something... really.

And now, I feel I need to summarise the events... :ajbemused:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?NR=1&v=2bz-Qet4BDM&feature=endscreen This is what I think I am.

This is what I really am.

:fluttercry:

Dam, keep it up, IM LUVING THIS

Hhhmmm...now there's seven of them. Lucky Seven.

i finally watched this movie (and just started zee book) best movie ever, now i love this even moredl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_OMG_LOVE.png

1535173 Akay.

1535815 t.qkme.me/361xni.jpg

1536795 I give you a badge for dedication.

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