Intro has a spelling error.

Oh Warlock, you very predictable old-school villian.

Looking in Forge, Longs and Reaper they must be formers Elements of Harmony.

Forge - Generosity: Looking in his personality and acts, he was pretty generous, he liberated Chrysalis, give the girls Quicksilvers, and to forgive celestia after that "accidental" stone spell.
Longstrider - Laughter: Due his jokes and form of talking he is pretty much laughter.
Reaper - Honestly: Don't Know actuality.
the others
Empress - Kindness.
Warlock - Loyalty - Now he is a traitor

great chapter! keep up the good work

poor forgeoh well.cant wait for the next one

Forge first prayed to Tittyshit's, the patron saint of when bad shit happens that you know are going to happen but you get roped into doing that stupid thing by your asshole siblings.

“Has he been holding that house the whole time? Shoot that must be a lotta weight!”

“Ya it fucking is!” Forge yelled in from the house….

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yeash I thouge shit hit the fan when he got out but this dam

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and the chapter in general has multiple punctuation errors. But it's no less entertaining.

I really hope it somehow isn't Warlock and that it is just another human that was disowned and because that not mentioned...but I fear it isn't so.