Remember kids, eat your veggies, go to school, and murder all your enemies.... I murder all my enemies....
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I can't wait to see where this goes! http://images.4channel.org/f/src/cause%20pimps.swf
Oh shit, what did Celestia did now?
1613616 I think she indulged her turn it to stone hobby again
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oh my fucking god that link i hilarious
can't wait to find out what celestia fucked up this time
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Finally. Been waiting forever for this.
I would like to say thank you to little big pony for updating this story. I have waited a long time for this to update.
Nice new update now I nead to waite for the next chapter for explanation what happend in the past.....so the ultimate waiting game begin!!....agan
You need someone to correct grammatical errors, but I'm loving the plot.
Have an epic picture as a reward!
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um.... either they lied, you forgot to add 'not'/'won't' or Celestia is a masochist (as in punishment would be not getting slapped!)!
Did you mean all of the ponies or just Celestia (it should then be womAn)?
You have many faults in this chapter.... get a proofreader!
You have to start a ne paragraph whenever a different person begins to speak. Always. There should never be more then one person talking per paragraph.
He's such a badass he can offer chrysalis pizza, now that takes serious balls.
I say one of the humans could have been mutated into Mc Knuckles Fist Punchalot.
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What a funny yet somber chapter
I am really surprised that this didn't get as big as it should have. Great chapter!
I like the story so far.
One critique, don't put one character speaking, and then another character reacting, on the same line. It will through the reader off, and really confuse them, causing them to reread to see who is doing/saying what.
WARLOCK!?!
wow. So does this mean there were 6 humans? Or is that Empress or Warlock? Anyway, great chapter. 2nd story I've read today where Blueblood gets beaten in a sword fight by a human.
i found this...
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Empress - The female counterpart of Emperor.
Warlock - The male counterpart of Witch.
I'll place my bets on that it is Warlock.
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good point. Didn't really think about that before I wrote it did I?
2093710 well.. somewhat easy to overlook.
“Some on Applejack" i think you made a typo
The cake.
Celestia will not forget that me thinks.
exactly what i thought
MY SIDES
ok this is a hoot, I love it.
So Celestia's a whore eh? Well that WOULD explain why she's always laid back in the show. Can't wait for more!
Intro has a spelling error.
Oh Warlock, you very predictable old-school villian.
Looking in Forge, Longs and Reaper they must be formers Elements of Harmony.
Forge - Generosity: Looking in his personality and acts, he was pretty generous, he liberated Chrysalis, give the girls Quicksilvers, and to forgive celestia after that "accidental" stone spell.
Longstrider - Laughter: Due his jokes and form of talking he is pretty much laughter.
Reaper - Honestly: Don't Know actuality.
the others
Empress - Kindness.
Warlock - Loyalty - Now he is a traitor
great chapter! keep up the good work
poor forgeoh well.cant wait for the next one
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I may be one of the later readers, but this chapter made me laugh pretty fucking hard xD
I think the last time I laughed this fucking hard was when I was playing CoD Zombies with my friends, literally fucking shit up and throwing all kinds of the most hilarious comments.
But seriously. I'll fucking sue you for causing me a half hour laughing session in 11:30pm. I think the whole building woke up...
Bro....The element of sexiness? REALLY? I CANT EVEN BREATHE RIGHT NOW *dies from suffocation* *Laughter to intense*
I'm dying right now!
That just... Cruel and Hilarious in the sametime, Good Job!
LOL, that last bit was funny
There are no words to do justice the amount of Win and Awesome that chapter ending was.
Oh god, I almost died of laughter at the time!
i was reading this in class and everyone just stared at me when i suddenly exploded into laughter... the teacher threw me out when i couldn't stop laughing
God dammit man! I'm seriously laughing nearly the whole fucking chapter XD
If you want to kill me, just do it!!!
FUCKING HILARIOUS.
MUST HAVE MOAR UPDATES!!!!
Words can't describe how funny this chapter is.
Teddy........... haaahaahaahaaaa
OLD DRAGON LADYFRIEND. SO MUCH HILARTIY. MOAR.
forgey's got a dragon groupie?