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What a funny yet somber chapter
I am really surprised that this didn't get as big as it should have. Great chapter!
I like the story so far.
One critique, don't put one character speaking, and then another character reacting, on the same line. It will through the reader off, and really confuse them, causing them to reread to see who is doing/saying what.
i found this...
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I may be one of the later readers, but this chapter made me laugh pretty fucking hard xD
Forger better have a dam good exsquse for a small fear of mare or I will be pissed
Booze at the party?
Can I come?!
2093199 OH MY GOD AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAA...
Ahem...
...thats funny i guess.
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Oh, it's good to see some racism here, haven't seen that on this site before, it makes me laugh.
Goddamn, that pie/pizza thing again! Unless Equestrian pizzas are more like pies but then they wouldn't be pizza then! Anyway "one" should be on and "morn" should be mourn. Ctrl+f once again to find them.
Reaper is so racist its hilarious! I laughed my fucking ass off at his comments!
some would say chrysalis character is a little of but seeing how she is banished from her hive and has pretty much wallowed in shame in that dungeon, I say this slightly new character is actually believable. Also is harder than it looks to copy character down exactly especially (if you're like me) if you never watched the show.