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Just here to read, and write, some FanFic. I really enjoy this stuff, so if you ever need an editor I can look it over for you, just hit me up!

Comments ( 21 )

This can go any of a dozen different ways. I'll have to stick around and see.

Poor Twilight at least now she'll be with her friends in the afterlife. :ajsleepy:

I love an ambiguous ending. :fluttercry:

I like it. Very good, very good indeed.

I think your stories are getting worse tbh
however this one was definitely not bad

1474543 It's been a while since I've written, TeXXy... I think I've lost my mojo.

Sorry if I'm beginning to let you down with my stories... :raritydespair:

1474691
Not at all, my friend. It's not a dramatic change, but it is kinda noticable. You do still maintain one of the best elements a writer on FimFiction can have - the element of surprise(and harmony! hueheuheuheuheuheuheuheue I am hilarious.)

Wow... You really know how to make me cry :fluttercry:

Awesome, at least Twi will be happier with her friends in her afterlife :ajsmug:

1474691 Logically, it is possible but unlikely that each new story you write will be better than the last. You'll get your backswing in due time. Why don't you write that Time Turner prompt? wink.

But for serious, don't feel pressured to write then you'll write better.

PresentPerfect
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I read this story twice, and it still doesn't make any sense.

6629744 I believe I wrote this as Twilight lived past all those she had once cared for, the loss getting to her and watching as she eventually dies; and the end could have been interpreted as a few different things. I don't exactly remember much about this story, even reading back over it quickly, since it's been so long and military life has kinda taken me away from writing. But, if you have any specific questions I'd do my best to answer whatever they may be.

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Primarily, I was confused as to how the mane six could just lay down and die. Do ponies have an off switch or something? And despite this, Twilight's able to outlive her parents?

6630267 Those... are definitely flaws in the story itself, when I didn't give a good background into what happened or the years prior; and as for "Twilight outliving her parents", that would be a normal thing, would it not? For the parents to die first; and the child later on.

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Actually, I guess I'm asking how her parents were able to outlive her friends. Either her friends died young or her parents died really old.

6630933 Admitedly, I didn't think about the chronological order of things and place them in a more accurate timeline of events that would have made sense. So, errors in my writing.

This was a fic I read like a year ago but forgot to fav. Now, I've finally re-read it and remember why I cried the first time.

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