Yeah, so my friend Twilight got me this weird "Frienship Diary" thingy and I don't even know how to use it. I think she said something about "Writing down my social interactions and how they make me feel," or something smart like she usually does. It's not even that big, only ten chapters! Hardly diary material if you ask me.
Whatever. All I know is Pinkie Pie and the rest of my friends are getting one, so I might as well get one too. After all, SOMEPONY'S gotta have a cool diary, right? Now if I could just figure out what to write in it...
Chapters (2)
This makes me feel vaguely voyeuristic for reading Rainbow's diary, because this sounds exactly like her! Short but sweet, I like it
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I ain't done yet, sucka!
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Looking forward to further chapters
Applejack is a one word name.
Sounds promising...
I liked this! A nice simple slice of life!
Also, found a few typos!
This was the second time things got awkward fast, neither of us wanting to meet the others eyes. "So yeah," I said. "I gotta get back to whether patrol."
The river I washed myself in was awfully cold for a nice summer day, and by the time I was done I didn't feel tired anymore, so I decided to stop by my friend Fluttershy's house. When I got there, though, there was a not on the door.
This is interesting! Keep it going.
Pegasus pools -- Actually I might have been happy just with the boring version. RD can make anything awesome.
I didn't see the word hit.
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Fixed and
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I LAUGHED SO HARD!
This is good so far. Just a s long as Dash doesn't forget that Spike is her friend too.
1623656 LOL It would have had to be made Mature from that line if you had forgotten the word hit
Make sure I, the one and only RDD doesn't slam my own gender.
Dairy sound (too); soft, sappy, or not cool enough. Never girly, Thxs
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What?
Good sir/madam, are you in good mental condition? It seems I cannot understand your choice of words, as it were.
1753907 To put it simply, RD does not use the word 'girly' to describe anything. Find a makeshift word, please.