Mother Bucking first

finally! better really be lunaxocxoc this time

Before I read this, I should say that you should use the

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But replace {} with []

>>14732681473268

Yeah, doesnt work.  

is ink immortal now?

>>14739831473983

Dunno.  Never played around with the thought before.  

>>14754491475449you know resurecting ink was technically necromancy ?

>>14760201476020

Yes and no; he was still alive in a gemstone.  They just cast an extremely overpowered healing spell on his body and fused the obsidian necklace with it.  

>>14760481476048but they took dead body and used magic to both heal and shove a soul inside it.. that sounds like necromancy to me!

>>14761451476145

Eh, maybe.  I don't think of it that way.  

The Princesses stared at Spurspark and I, unsure how to deal with this, and Chroma continued to stare at me.  "Care to explain?"  she asked.

It was now my turn to cough awkwardly.  "Uhh - maybe later.  Suffice to say, it's an expression where we are from."  Her curious gaze was still present, but she managed to contain herself for now.

Oh shit! I almost forgot that Ink is hiding is humanity from Chroma! Also, if this is going where I think it might be going, DAMMIT INK, STAY FAITHFUL TO CHROMA, YOU SLUT!!!!!!

(but yay, second story )

So, obvious beginning to shipping is obvious.    I tried to go for a more calm, tender aspect in the second scene of this chapter, and hope it came across as so.    I hope to get to start on the next chapter soon, but not tonight.  Already an hour and a half past when I should have gone to bed.  

Night y'all.  Enjoy.  

finally! lunaxoc shipping!

'"Back home, monogamy was. . .  not very common.'

Should that be 'polygamy'?

>>15033011503301

We will have to see where this takes us! So far, keep it up!

>>15082861508286

  I got looooots of plans.  

Hmmmmm. . .  somewhere form five to eight OC's yet to enter, a few canon characters, and, oh, probably thirty to forty chapters, if my cards play out right.  

I'm going to try and steer into a more serious aspect in the story now, hammering out some of the shipping and other issues.  I realized I have been a little light with the story of late (not including the closing to the first plot arc), and I am not trying to write that kind of story.  So, a slight change of pace, if I can help it.  

EDIT:  Also, I apologize for how infrequent my updates are.  Been a little busy recently, what with work and stuff. . .  and Halo 4.  

We forgive you and First reader comment again YES

Damn son! I just realize this bro has died TWICE! I... I... I think he might be th Highlander...

>>16122401612240

If you are talking The Highlander, as in the Scottish immortal, then yes; he is who my mom named me after.  

>>16117721611772

Your first one was better, though; first comment on STORY.  

>>16122931612293THAR KAN B ONLY 1!!!!

>>16123241612324

You have undoubtedly made my night, Fireeaters.  

>>16125331612533

*****IGNORE COMMENTS UP UNTIL NEXT SECTION OF RED TEXT:  OUTDATED*****

So, I tried to get a little more emotional at the end of this one.  I feel I did a horrible job, but I don't really know how to improve it.  Any ideas would help.  Honeslty, I'm not super happy with the last scene.  But I can fix it another day; all you awesome followers deserve something to read, at least.  

But, I am also thinking of writing multiple chapters and not posting for a long while, then to start posting bi-weekly or something.  Input would be appreciated.  

Hope you enjoy, to some degree.  

After all they went through, including him literally dying for them all it doesn't seem realistic that she'd just up and leave him without more of an explanation or reason.

>>17060701706070

She wasnt really there for everything though.  She knows he died. . .  wait. . .

Oops.  She knows he died once.  *facehoof*

I might actually rewrite that entire section pretty soon here anyway.  I wrote it half asleep, and wasnt happy with it to begin with.  

>>17069201706920How'd she think he survived in the gem? The only new information is that he's from earth and was originally a human. So I will say this: What the hell man?!?!

>>17075931707593

Yeah, I rushed this last night.  Im taking the entire chapter down and restarting.

Basically,

I fucked up.  

Also, I was talking about dying on Earth in this chapter.  I managed to forget last night that I had died twice.  

>>17094651709465

its always the little details that seem to always get forgotten

*GHASP* LUNA HAS THE HOTS FOR INK!!!! OMGWTFBBQDERP

NOTE:  So, part 2!  This time, Luna x OC x OC, plus numerous other pairings, if I get around to them.  !)

so basically, this is a harem story...??

meh whatever I still like it!

>>17930751793075

Nah, not harem, pairings of my other OC's.  

>>17933501793350 oooh okay :D

heh, guess I read it wrong there...

>>17938531793853

Nah, I just kept getting comments like that, so I changed the wording.  

>>17943501794350 okay

It would have been a bit weird, I mean it doesn't really fit in with the first story, or what has been published of this one.

>>17943671794367

Yeah, a harem isnt much my thing.  

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Sorry, that was for the previous rendition of this chapter, which had half of it deleted.  

Well author, I for one enjoy the happy-go-lucky feel of this piece of fiction. Most other, if not all other, stories here all have violence or worldshattering events in them.

I don't see anything wrong with the part after his "session" with Rarity, it's quite tranquil actually. Nice and calm. A lovely change of pace from most stories here. Not that they are bad, in fact most of them are great epics of awesome heroics and amazing feats of courage, but sometimes even a reader that doesn't actually do anything needs some respite from adventures and glory, ya kno'?

>>18367831836783

It's what you DIDNT see that was horrible.  I deleted about 1000 words.  

FYI, one friend of mine voted #2.  

>>18367891836789 woooowww..... that's harsh, author! Poor words, what about their families!? D:

You cruel cruel man(or are you a girl?) WHAT ABOUT THEIR FAMILIES?!??!?!!! *epic inhale* *waa waa waa, CMC volume.* D:

on an unrelated note, *snort* this –><– is called *snort snigger* is called - DUCK!!! AHAHAaa!! xD

I support the Mass Effect crossover. Not enough out there that are good.

>>18368251836825

Those words were orphaned and evil, manipulative things, effing with my plans.  

i cant decide between 2 or 3, they both sound awesome, but i think i would enjoy the mass effect one more, we should get around to playing ME3 again one of these days

Hmm. . .  I got inspired.  Somehow.  

Interesting chapter. I'm looking forward to what you come out with next.

Option 2. GOD, you can't BELIEVE how much I have search for a Mass Effect/My Little Pony crossover fic, where Shepard and Tali are together in Equestria.