It is two years to the day since Twilight Sparkle started officially living in Ponyville, and the rest of the Mane 6 try to celebrate. With Spike distracting the bookish mare and a whole host of things to prepare, will they succeed?
Maybe.
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Yes! You posted it! This is the Best! Possible! THING!
Now here's a five give me two tens.
This was hilarious
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Oka-waaiit a minute!
Dat ending
Let's not forget that this is also pretty much an Abbott and Costello sketch.
And the princesses became the royal jesters.
I'll give you a facehoof for a mustache.
I can't stop laughing at this, but at the same time, my mind is still saying, "The hell did I just read?"
Derpy Dash win!
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Thank you!
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Not sure what you just read? Yay, I win!
Celestia and Luna as the royal jesters? Yes please!
Where's the romance you tagged?
I don't see it anywhere. other than that: good story.
lots of random and comedy there. especialy random. very random
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Glad you enjoyed it. As for the romance, I wasn't sure if that... thing, with Twilight and Spike near the end counted, so I thought I'd play it safe.
Hasn't Spike been there just as long? Even from amazing writers (like yourself) and artists (like Pixelkitties) who love Spike, he still gets neglected too damned often. This really gets me down.
Seriously, is this an angry feminist fanfic?
Missing a pretty crucial word there. Sounds like Spike accidentally the whole grocery list.
Missing a rather important word again. The way she says it makes it sound like they want Spike distracted so he's kept away from the festivities. You're even doing it by accident!
Well, at least there's that epic ending. Glad somepony appreciates him! 
Man, what I wouldn't give to see her face at the end of that scene. I wonder where the majority of Rarity's anger is coming from...
This story may have its flaws, but it doesn't nearly deserve the percentage of downvotes it has. I certainly found Trixie entertaining. There's nothing more hilarious than seeing that arrogant, classy, attention-seeking mare caught in a wacky situation and acting ridiculously haughty. You did a fairly awesome job with Zecora's rhyming, too.
so? . Spike ended up kidnapped by Twilight?