Snuggy-Wuggy and Nibbly-Wibbly
This was written as a companion story for Souldin's very nicely done “Open To Interpretation” oneshot! :D That fic was not only adorable, but it was really nicely written in how it captured the interpretations of the little scene during “A Canterlot Wedding Part 2”, I think you all know which one I mean. ;)
I loved that little one-shot and so I accepted a challenge I wasn't even given to write about what was going on between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash while the other ponies were discussing what REALLY happened between them.
So here, is what was REALLY going on. :D
Now go read Open To Interpretation! THEN come back here.
Also, I know they call each other “nibbly-wibbly” and “snuggy-wuggy” a ton of times, but here's the thing. THAT'S THE POINT.
Settled on her bed, Fluttershy happily relaxed into the soft, comfy mattress of her suite. It sure felt amazing to be able to relax on what had to be the perfect bed in the world. Or at least, in Equstria, which also played second to her own bed. But after the arduous events that happened with the invasion of the Changelings, any kind of comfy bed was welcomed.
Dress hung up, her body free, Fluttershy felt more relaxed than she did all day. Wedding preparation alone was very stressful, and the actual wedding event was more or less tiring. Especially since they all had been up at the crack of dawn to make sure the last-minute preparations were made. Then the long-awaited wedding ceremony, the reception, all of which came to last all day and well into the hours of the evening. It was a long day, a very long day. Well worth it, none the less, but long.
The creamy yellow pony did feel tired, but not quite sleepy. If anything, she didn't even really want sleep to claim her just yet. Despite that she could go to sleep if she wanted to, right now, the timing just wasn't right. No, there was something very important missing from this picture.
It didn't make sense to any outsider. Fluttershy was in her room in Canterlot Palace, where she and the rest of her friends were staying for the night, undressed from her bridesmaid gown, and perfectly comfortable on her bed. She had cleaned, all that was left was to sleep. The next day would be the train ride back to Ponyville. That also meant a lot of sleep would have to be gained, despite that they weren't going to catch the train until late in the afternoon so that everypony could sleep in.
Fluttershy sighed softly to herself, feeling a sense of comfort and relaxation washing over her. Nothing could have been better than this. At least, except for one thing.
Knock knock knock knockity knock!
Immediately, the pink-maned Pegasus looked up toward the door. That knock cycle was all she needed to know who was there. A bright, beaming smile crossed her face as she cleared her throat and called out, softly of course, to whoever stood at the other side of the doors.
“C-Come in!”
Moments upon that response, one of the big doors opened, letting in a lot more light into the room from the brightly lit hallway. In the doorway stood a cyan pony with a rainbow mane and tail, cerise eyes set upon the pony on her bed, while a smirk found its way onto her features.
“Got room for one more, pal?” Rainbow Dash smirked confidently at her best friend, a gleam in her eyes.
Cheeks turning pink, Fluttershy nodded and gestured for Rainbow to join her on the bed. The cyan Pegasus eagerly obliged, closing the door behind her and hovering into the air. She flew over to the bed, then slowly lowered down onto the mattress near her companion. Stretching out on the comfy, soft white sheets, Rainbow sighed happily as she made herself comfortable, enjoying the softness of the sheets and comfort of the very soft yet still sturdy mattress. Not quite like a cloud or her own bed, but it was comfy enough. She was perfectly content.
Just moments after settling on the bed, Fluttershy scooted closer, snuggling up against Rainbow Dash. Said mare smirked, but was otherwise grinning, nuzzling the creamy yellow pony.
“Hello there, snuggy-wuggy,” Rainbow chuckled, unable to keep from smiling.
Fluttershy giggled, leaning happily against her best friend with utmost happiness and contentment. A warm yet energetic surge coursed through her body, adding to the already relaxing atmosphere of the room and her bed, a great amount of combined feelings that only snuggling with Rainbow ever brought.
“Somepony's awfully cuddly tonight.” Rainbow said sweetly, leaning over a bit and gently nibbling Fluttershy's ear.
“Hee...ooh...oh, nibbly-wibbly...” Fluttershy cooed, giggling from the nibbles and nuzzling her companion. “What can I say, I just love to snuggle.”
“I kinda figured that before...” Rainbow said knowingly, nibbling Fluttershy's ear a bit more. She let go, for the moment, and leaned down a bit to level with the other Pegasus' face, nuzzling her cheek again.
Fluttershy beamed, turning and planting a sweet kiss on Rainbow's cheek. The cyan mare blushed, but overall looked elated. With a chuckle, she leaned over and kissed Fluttershy on the cheek, lingering a moment before nuzzling her.
“Oh, Rainbow...you know... I never did get a chance to thank you for what you did...saving me from the Changelings that took on your form. I can't believe you were among them...if not for that, I'd have been done for...” Fluttershy said softly, snuggling against her more.
Laughing lightly, Rainbow nibbled her ear again. “Come on, snuggy-wuggy, you don't have to thank me! I'd have done the same for all my friends! You know me, I never let my friends hang!”
“I know...” Fluttershy giggled from the nibbles. “But I'm just grateful you knew it was me.”
Snorting, Rainbow shook her head, speaking between nibbles. “Of course I knew it was you! The Fluttershy I know would have cowered like that, it was all I needed to know!”
Despite the little pout that formed on her face, she knew that Rainbow, deep down, meant that with love. As critical as she could have been at times, she knew it wasn't with any intent to hurt her or anypony, it was just how she could be, and sometimes needed to learn to think before she spoke. But for this, her cowardice helped in the situation rather than deter it.
Sure enough, as confirmation, Rainbow nuzzled her, then nibbled her ear again.
“Besides, I sure don't mind saving my sweetheart...” Rainbow said playfully, laughing.
In response, Fluttershy angled her head and nibbled Rainbow's ear soon after, making the daredevil giggle. Even though Rainbow Dash was the nibbler of the two, it didn't stop Fluttershy from occasionally offering a few nibbles here and there of her own.
Ceasing in her own nibbles, Fluttershy nuzzled her companion before then planting butterfly kisses along her snout. With a mischievous glint in her eyes, Rainbow turned her head slightly and caught the yellow pony's lips in a sweet kiss. Fluttershy giggled, her blush growing, and kissed back.
A hoof came up to gently stroke Fluttershy's mane, to which the said pony sighed happily in response to. Rainbow ran her hoof along the soft, blossom-pink strands amidst kissing Fluttershy, prolonging the kiss a few more seconds. Pulling away, she smiled with a mischievous but still joyous glint in her eyes and smile. She lay their foreheads together, chuckling as an enraptured Fluttershy snuggled even closer.
“You're real pretty when you blush, sweetie pie,” Rainbow said sweetly into her ear.
Fluttershy giggled at her compliment, nuzzling the cyan mare's snout, “Only because what you say can make me blush ever so, my Dashie...”
A laugh escaped Rainbow Dash as she too snuggled closer to Fluttershy and nibbled her ear. Though nopony else but the two of them knew, but Rainbow did indeed have her own pet name for Fluttershy, given how much the timid pony enjoyed snuggling. Same went for Fluttershy, giving Rainbow a pet name in reference to how much silly fun she had nibbling her ear.
Pinkie Pie had witnessed the over-the-top romantic cuteness of Big Macintosh and Cheerilee, under the influence of the love poison, calling each other silly little romantic pet names. But for Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy, they did so on their own coalition, happily calling each other snuggy-wuggy and nibbly-wibbly just about every time they were alone. Maybe other pet names were thrown in here and there, but it was these two little pet names that were used the most.
Even Rainbow herself would never have thought she would ever use silly, cheesy pet names like this. If someone suggested it to her back in the past, she would have gagged. But now, having given and received such cute and silly yet sweet pet names with and from Fluttershy, she couldn't help but just have fun with it. In honesty, after hearing the tale of what had happened between Big Mac and Cheerilee, both Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash found they liked the silly little nicknames. At least, calling each other those names.
While their relationship had been private from everypony else, including their friends, this had become part of it. Calling each other these silly little pet names had been “their thing”, so to speak. If out in the open, they would likely slip and call each other these pet names in front of everypony else. And of course, since these pet names were cheesy and left unpleasant tastes in anypony's mouth, they felt it best to keep that under wraps as well. Rainbow especially felt mortified at anypony finding out that she actively addressed Fluttershy as snuggy-wuggy or even something as sweet and nice as “sweetie pie”. Even Fluttershy wasn't too crazy about somepony else knowing what they did together behind closed doors. So, it was agreed that they keep this quiet.
Right now, in this moment, together, they didn't have a care in the world.
As she lay here, on the bed, on her stomach, with Fluttershy cuddled up to her, it was heavenly. Rainbow Dash felt amazing. Comfortable and warm even, but she felt so many wonderful things right now. Just being here, snuggling with Fluttershy, whispering sweet things into her ear, nibbling her ear, and sharing little kisses, was enough to touch the soft part of her heart.
Notcing Fluttershy's bridesmaid dress hanging inside the open wardrobe, Rainbow chuckled and nibbled Fluttershy's ear again.
“You know, you looked beautiful in your dress, snuggy-wuggy.”
“Hee...It was beautiful. But oh, everypony else was so much prettier...especially Princess Cadance.”
Rainbow snorted, shaking her head, “Please, Cadance was the bride and kinda had to look the prettiest. But even then she can't hold a candle to you, little cutie patootie!”
Giggling, Fluttershy nuzzled Rainbow lovingly, “You're too kind, Rainbow... But I sure can attest to how gorgeous you looked, my Dashie.”
“D'aww, stop it! Compared to you, no way!” Rainbow snickered, looking amused, “I looked awesome, which is...well, awesome! I don't look pretty! Rarity works to look pretty, but me, I just look awesome in anything!”
“Of course,” the creamy yellow Pegasus said sweetly, kissing her best friend's cheek, “but you did look very lovely in your rainbow dress, your mane all tied up so nicely, and the flowers on your head! Oh, nibbly-wibbly, I was afraid I wouldn't be able to keep my eyes off you!”
“Heh,” Rainbow smirked deviously, kissing the corner of Fluttershy's mouth. “Well, my little snuggy-wuggy, I'm just lucky I was able to keep my eye on you when nopony else was looking.”
“Me too...” Fluttershy admitted, looking into the other pony's glimmering cerise eyes.
Chuckling, Rainbow nuzzled their noses. “So, how awesome was my Sonic Rainboom? Awesome, or totally awesome?”
“Oh...it was amazing, Rainbow. Beyond awesome.” Fluttershy crooned, her eyelids lowering as she snuggled against her again, “I was amazed just as I had been back during the Best Young Flier's Competition. I'm...I'm so proud of you, Rainbow...my nibbly-wibbly sweetie pie... I was so happy for you, and for you to pull it off so well, I'm so glad.”
Proud, as well as touched, the daredevil Pegasus leaned in and kissed Fluttershy tenderly on the lips with kiss after kiss, bringing a foreleg around her shoulders. Pulling away, she nuzzled her lovingly and let out a happy breath.
“Thanks, Fluttershy, you have no idea how much that means to me,” she whispered.
Fluttershy let out a soft “d'aww” before nuzzling Rainbow's snout again, “Oh, I'm only telling the truth. But you're welcome, sweetheart. Your Sonic Rainboom was surely the highlight of the entire wedding.”
“Oh, you're too much, snuggy-wuggy!” Rainbow grinned, reaching up to nibble the beautiful mare's ear again.
"Hee...oh, nibbly-wibbly..."
At that moment, whether it came before or just started now, Rainbow's ears perked upon hearing a sound in the hallway. Though she concentrated on nibbling Fluttershy's ear, her own ears listened for the sound. Sure enough, it came in the form of hoof steps. It was probably Twilight, considering that she had heard Rarity and Applejack get up and walk around earlier before they headed downstairs. What was keeping her awake? It puzzled the cyan mare, but she shrugged it off. It was probably just the excitement of the day still keeping her awake. But the pause in the hoofsteps were what concerned her, especially since they had paused near the door. But it wasn't long before they continued, indicating that Twilight was indeed heading downstairs.
Shaking her head, the cyan Pegasus lay her head against Fluttershy's affectionately. “So, you're not mad we couldn't dance?” She whispered, changing the subject.
Blushing, Fluttershy hadn't voiced her wish during the reception, but she wasn't surprised that Rainbow had caught on. It was true, she had wanted them to dance together, but that was risky in getting caught.
The golden mare opened her eyes, nuzzling her best friend's prismatic mane. “Oh, not at all. I understand why we couldn't do that. And I...I didn't mind you dancing with Soarin', not at all.”
“It was a dance between friends, or well, fangirl and idol, I guess,” Rainbow admitted sheepishly, chuckling a bit. “Sure it was awesome to dance and hang out with one of my idols! But I guess...oh, fine, Flutters, little cutie, I wished it were you there with me. I didn't need to dance to hang out with my idols! Soarin' just suggested it to have some fun and get in the spirit of dancing.”
Fluttershy nodded, kissing Rainbow's cheek sweetly. “I know... I could see that... Well, I really could have done without Rarity suggesting that you would be the next bride.”
“....She said that?!” Rainbow looked at Fluttershy with wide eyes.
“...She did. And I...well I do know better, but I...well...” Fluttershy looked down at the sheets.
“Aw man...” The cyan pony cursed under her breath, but let it go for now. Instead, she snuggled Fluttershy closer, nibbling her ear.
“Hey, Flutters...my snuggle bunny...hey...”
Sniffling, Fluttershy shook her head and looked her in the eye, “I'm sorry....that was silly of me to overreact. I know you wouldn't do that to me, Rainbow. I'm sorry....nibbly-wibbly...”
Rainbow smiled and kissed her on the forehead, assuring her further. She could understand that Fluttershy may have felt that way, especially since nopony else knew what was going on. Could she blame anypony for thinking that? No, but she did hope that it wouldn't become some kind of a rumour. But right now was not the time to think about any of this.
All that mattered was that she and Fluttershy were here, together, alone, snuggled up, without a care in the world.
She felt bad seeing Fluttershy having a moment of disappointment, which for her, was never fun to see. Now, seeing that the beautiful yellow pony was smiling again, it was all she needed to be reassured.
“That's my snuggy-wuggy,” Rainbow whispered into her ear, nibbling it again.
Fluttershy giggled, all of her troubles and worries just utterly melting away. “Oh, Dashie...hee hee...my nibbly-wibbly...”
“If it makes you feel any better, he was actually eyeing Applejack a lot of the time,” Rainbow snickered, winking. “He recognized her as the pony who sold him the apple pie back at the Gala. After we danced, I introduced them properly.”
“Oh...” Fluttershy giggled, looking relieved and yet contemplative at the same time. “Applejack and Soarin'?”
“I know! I thought the same thing!” Rainbow gave a laugh, running a hoof through Fluttershy's mane. “But he thought AJ was really nice and easygoing, and liked that she was just treating him like any other regular pony. I don't know, I left 'em alone for a bit so they could talk and stuff.”
Beaming brightly, the creamy yellow Pegasus nuzzled her dear friend again before kissing her cheek, and then nibbling her ear this time. Little sounds of delight escaped Rainbow Dash as she angled her head to give Fluttershy a better reach.
“That was ever so nice of you to let them just talk, honey bunny.”
“D'aww, it was nothing! Soarin' wanted to chat with AJ, and AJ was happy to do that, so why not?”
Nodding, the animal-loving pony nuzzled their muzzles before then meeting their lips in a kiss. Fluttershy moaned as Rainbow deepened the kiss, much to her delight. After some time, a pretty prolonged period, they parted, meeting each other's eyes. Rainbow Dash's cerise orbs were brimming with passion and love, in contrast to Fluttershy's enraptured, glimmering aquamarine eyes.
“Oh, Rainbow....” Fluttershy cooed in a lovesick manner, her eyelids lowering.
Smirking a bit, Rainbow lay their foreheads together, kissing her beloved's snout, and then leaning up to nibble her ear again.
“Ooohh...my nibble honey bunny...” Giggled the enraptured yellow mare.
“Snuggy-wuggy,” Rainbow whispered back into her ear before she resumed nibbling. She brought her foreleg around Fluttershy's withers, bringing the giggling pony closer-if that were possible- and continued to lovingly nibble her ear. “Pretty cutie snuggly.”
Fluttershy moaned and giggled with happiness, nuzzling her love. “Oh, nibbly-wibbly...you're so sweet tonight!”
“Hey, just doing what you do to me,” the cyan mare smirked with passionate deviousness, kissing her ear and then nibbling it again. “My snuggy-wuggy...”
“Oooooohhh!!!!!” Came a third, new voice.
Immediately, the cuddling, lovey-dovey ponies snapped their gazes to the now open door. Much to their surprise and dismay, in the doorway stood none other than a happily surprised and grinning Pinkie Pie. Not a single word was spoken, not a single sound was uttered. Fluttershy buried her face in Rainbow's neck, the said pony looking a mix of shocked and annoyed. Pinkie, undeterred, just giggled uncontrollably.
“So it was you two! I had no idea! But now that I think about it...! Yeah! Wow! Awwww!! You guys are so cute! So you're snuggy-wuggy and nibbly-wibbly! Hee hee! Carry on!” Giggled the pink Earth pony as she bounced out, shutting the door behind her.
Silence. Only the ticking grandfather clock in the room could be heard between the two ponies. But it wasn't long before soft, frightened squeaks were heard from Fluttershy. The sounds not only caught Rainbow Dash's attention, but concerned her as well. Gently, she stroked the blossom-pink mane and kissed the top of her head to assure her.
“Hey, snuggy-wuggy...” Rainbow whispered in her ear.
“Rainbow...she knows....” Fluttershy whimpered, trembling a bit. “Now she's going to tell everypony!”
“Hey, hey,” Rainbow said in a louder voice, placing a hoof to Fluttershy's mouth, “Cool it, Fluttershy. Just calm down. Pinkie's just...being Pinkie. If she tells, she'll only tell our friends...and we didn't exactly tell her to Pinkie Promise not to tell anypony. We'll deal with that as it comes. Don't worry about it now.”
Trembling still, Fluttershy managed to raise her head to look at the cyan Pegasus, who smiled at her tenderly. Her heart swelled as the warmth and security washed over her, just as it always did in moments like these. Ever since they met, ever since they became friends, Rainbow had always been something of her protector. Even in smaller moments like this, the protector in her never dwindled, and only made Fluttershy feel safer. Now that she could regain herself, breathe better, the timid mare was slowly calming down.
“Okay, Rainbow Dash...” Fluttershy whispered, nodding slowly.
Smiling more, Rainbow kissed her on the forehead. “That's my snuggy-wuggy. Go on and lie down, I'll be right with you. Gonna turn out some lights.”
Nodding once more, Fluttershy watched Rainbow Dash for a few seconds as the said mare hopped off the bed to tend to the lights in the room. Stretching her body out a little bit, as well as her limbs, the yellow pony crawled over to the pillows. Rolling onto her back and making herself comfortable, Fluttershy turned her head along one of the pillows to observe her companion's handy work.
Rainbow turned out the main lights of the room, opened the window to let in some air, and then hovered over to the bedside table. She turned on the lamp, casting the room in a dimly bright glow and adding to the relaxing atmosphere. Once done, the cyan Pegasus turned her attention back to Fluttershy. A smirk overcame her features, clearly scheming.
Hovering up onto the bed, Rainbow gently yet quickly crawled on top of Fluttershy, laying over her. Despite the playful, predatory smirk adorning her features, it did still serve as a sweet reminder of the old days. When they were alone, as fillies, Rainbow would lay on top of her every now and then. Either because she was tired, or just felt like it. Fluttershy could remember just how smaller Rainbow had once been compared to herself, which made it easier for the smaller filly to lie on top of her. Sometimes Fluttershy did the same, though she had a different angle to work with since her limbs were lankier.
Today, while they lay on top of each other for much different reasons, it didn't fail to bring back those sweet fillyhood memories they had.
Once more, Fluttershy felt her troubles just melt away as she gazed up at the cyan mare above her. All that mattered was their sweet little cocoon they were now enveloped in. She was right where she wanted to be, in the close embrace of her beloved Rainbow Dash.
“Feel better, snuggy-wuggy?” Rainbow whispered, nuzzling their noses before she went to, of course, nibble her ear.
Giggling with glee, Fluttershy nodded as she brought her forelegs around Rainbow's neck, “I feel wonderful, nibbly-wibbly.”
Glad for that, the daredevil continued to lovingly nibble Fluttershy's ear. The sweet little giggles and sighs from the pony beneath her encouraged her all the more to keep going. After the little debacle that had happened, even she needed to distract herself from thinking of the consequences. Luckily, that was never too hard when she was around Fluttershy.
“Yeah, that's right... Feel wonderful! Who's my little snuggy-wuggy?” Rainbow teased, now kissing along her ear as well as nibbling it.
Beneath her, the timid mare giggled as she beamed at her, “Hee...me...”
“That's right! Who's my snuggle bunny?”
“Me...”
“Who's my little cutie patootie sweetie pie?”
“Me...”
Getting an idea, Rainbow traversed her kisses down further, reaching Fluttershy's chest. “Who's my snuggy-wuggy, again?”
Fluttershy giggled again, bringing her hooves in closer as some kind of measley protection, despite her big smile, “Me!”
“You got it, pal! And you get a prize! Want to know what it is?” The predatory smirk returned as the cyan pony traversed a little lower down Fluttershy's belly.
“No...” Fluttershy smiled, seeing where this was going.
“Too bad!”
Pinning Fluttershy down by her hips, Rainbow lowered her head, clamped her lips upon Fluttershy's belly, and blew a powerful raspberry right into her fuzzy coat. As expected, the timid pony squealed with laughter and wiggled beneath her grasp. Chuckling against the creamy yellow tummy, the prismatic-maned daredevil blew another raspberry into it, earning a squealing laugh yet again.
“Noooooooo!!” Fluttershy squealed, thrashing and waving her forelegs wildly between laughter.
“Go on, Fluttershy! Say it!” Rainbow laughed, blowing another raspberry into the quivering belly. “Surrender! Say it!”
“I-I-I...!!!” Fluttershy laughed harder, trying to regain her voice. “I...s-surrender!”
Smirking more, Rainbow Dash licked her lips and kept them hovered over the tummy, “And...?”
Breathing heavily, the creamy yellow pony's forelegs collapsed back on either side of her form along the mattress. Eventually, she gazed up at Rainbow with hazed, twinkling eyes, panting softly with her lips parted, “You...you're the greatest flier in all of...Equestria...nopony could ever surpass you...never...you're a living legend...”
“You got it!” Rainbow laughed, now crawling over her love and settling down on top of her again. “And?”
“And...I'm your little snuggy-wuggy snuggle bunny...” Fluttershy cooed cutely, gazing up at her with bright eyes.
A giggle escaped the cyan Pegasus as she nodded, nuzzling their noses. “That's right, Fluttershy.”
Recovering from the bout of laughter, the enamoured creamy yellow pony brought her forelegs around the other mare's neck again. This time, she even ran her hooves through the prismatic mane, gently, savouring its softness. Fluttershy smiled lovingly up at her beloved, feeling her heart race and melt all at once as she received a loving smile in return.
Rainbow Dash responded in kind as she ran one hoof through the soft pink mane of her companion, revelling in its softness. The softest thing her hooves ever touched. She couldn't help but take a moment to admire just how beautiful Fluttershy looked right now. While that was a given, she looked pretty all the time, there was just something about this entire lighting and atmosphere that added to it. It was hard not to observe, but for what it was worth, it didn't matter. What made Fluttershy even more beautiful was certainly the heart within. Everything about the timid mare, flaws and all, were just what shaped her up to be the very pony she knew most of her life. Fluttershy.
In moments such as these, she too knew where she wanted to be. Where she belonged.
Leaning down all the way, Rainbow kissed Fluttershy gently on the lips, prolonging it. Sweet, soft lips kissed back in kind, engaging in a gentle and tender kiss filled with a lot of love. With their hooves running through each other's manes, bodies laid together, the intimacy of their sweet kiss was all too wonderful. It was all they needed.
Pulling away, the cyan mare lay their foreheads together as she whispered, “I love you, Fluttershy.”
With a beaming, loving smile, Fluttershy brought a hoof to Rainbow's cheek in a gentle caress, “I love you too, Rainbow. ...My nibbly-wibbly...”
“Awww...” Rainbow chuckled, placing a hoof over the creamy yellow one upon her cheek, “I love you more, snuggy-wuggy.”
“No, I love you more.”
“Nuh-uh, I love you more.”
“Nooo... Me.”
“Me!”
“Me!”
“Me!”
Silence.
Rainbow snickered, as did Fluttershy.
“I still love you more, snuggy-wuggy,” Rainbow cooed, nuzzling their noses.
Giggling, Fluttershy brought both her hooves to cup Rainbow's cheeks, “And I still love you more, nibbly-wibbly.”
They laughed heartily, embracing each other before Fluttershy pulled her beloved into another kiss.
Only for the door to fly open, letting in a square path of light into the room from the brightly lit hallway beyond. Not enough time went on before the kissing ponies broke away to turn their heads at the interruption...
“Ooooohh!!” Pinkie Pie gasped, and grinned. “Wow! I guess I was right! You two really ARE doing that! Anyway, I came to apologize for walking in on you two, but now I see you two are getting busy! Sorry! I'll just leave you to it! Don't mind me! Pretend like I wasn't even here!”
The pink Earth pony happily hummed as she closed the door to the suite. While it was best to leave them alone, she didn't hear many sounds. Just little whimpers and soothing whispers. It was easy to tell who was doing either one, to be sure. She giggled, delighted at her discoveries, despite the mild pangs of guilt for inadvertently ruining their sweet moments together.
Shrugging it off, deciding to properly apologize in the morning, Pinkie Pie happily bounced off to rejoin her three other friends in the lounge area. At least now she could tell them which one was nibbly-wibbly...
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Haven't read the story yet
*Looks at the picture*
... oh god...
Great as always.
so sweet it gave me diabetes with a hint cheese also NintendoGal55 will you do a humanized flutterdash?
The sweetest and cutest story ever! I love it!
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Definitely gonna RIL tonight. I love bringing up that scene to my less fanatical friends and ruining the show for them, along with their image of me. I'll leave some feedback, and judging by a quick glance, your writing style prompts something positive.
1429223 I will be!
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Oh, you! 
Oddly enough it was not due to having you on my stalking list that I found out that this story had been uploaded, rather I found out that Snuggles and Nibbles had been uploaded due to the fact that four people had favourite Open to Interpretation out of the blue. So yeah, thanks to this story being connected as official canon to my own story, it has in turn been getting more readers for me so as thanks I shall review as of right now... now how I do these reviews again
?
Oh yes, right, I start things off with the positive. Putting aside the whole
factor, which I do always love, there is the rather noticeable adorable factor to it all. Some of it sweet, some of it romantic, some it could be interpreted as the start of something saucy but generally it is all cute. While being cute it is also well written, lots of well-crafted description and clear in what is happening. The way it is written does not dull and it alters its flow ever so slightly at times as to make the relaying of details interesting but retains a smooth pace. The second half truly became entertaining to read, the two discussing the wedding in general was okay but became much greater when addressing more specific things such as the dance. The little drama with Pinkie entering was handled nicely and the moments afterwards all felt like they deserved their place within the story. Also, 
SoarJack!
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From my days on the Super Smash Bros section of Fanfiction.net I was herald as the Review King and even now I plan to uphold that title so prepare yourself, here comes the critique. First criticism, while I can understand the repeated use of Nibbly-Wibbly and Snuggy-Wuggy I also feel you could have spaced them out a little better. Even if it was just Rainbow Dash calling Fluttershy Snuggy-Wuggy, then something like Cutie Patooie, then back to Snuggy-Wuggy again, this would have been better than the current case where it is more like Snuggy-Wuggy, Snuggy-Wuggy, Snuggy-Wuggy, Cutie Patooie, Snuggy-Wuggy. I also feel the story is a bit too long, considering that at its core it is but a really cute moment between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash being described in bountiful detail. I feel the length issue though lies more so with the first half of the story rather than the second. To be clear I felt the story started off well but from about this line
to this line
I felt that the story was taking it's time to feel eventful I guess you could say. As I mentioned in the positives everything became much greater when it became more specific, when the two talked about the dance and Soarin and everything after that all felt like it belonged. All the cute moments for instance felt like they were reactions between comments between the characters and actions such as Pinkie barging in or Rainbow Dash turning off the lights, while the moments in between the two quoted parts felt purposeless, cute simply for the sake of cute (which can be good but does not compare well to your later cute with actual reason outside of just being cute).
As for how well this integrates into Open to Interpretation, it integrates very well and I'm proud to consider this a canonical part of the story. Admittedly there could be improvements, such as adding in a moment where one of the two hears hoof steps (indicating Twilight going on downstairs, and the fact that Twilight's room was close enough to hear all of their nicknames) but this is more than satisfying in that area. So yeah, brilliantly written with plenty of charm, cuteness, and faithful to its source. You provide some interesting things to think about (that Rarity moment is worth applause for originality, truly a problem worth pointing out concerning secret relationships) and make this story more than just a cute FlutterDash moment. As for my favourite part, well that would be
Fantastic job, keep up the superb work!
How do I do this without seeming rude?
That. Was. Brilliant!
Give yourself a well deserved pat on the back.
Flutter-dash is best ship still!
1429449 Thank you SO much! I'm so glad you liked it and that it works well to the story's canon!
And as you can see, I managed to keep out what REALLY happened out on the battlefield. That was surprisingly easy, it was all about wording it right.
And I thank you for your critiquing, which I shall take into account and address immediately.
I'll fix it up here and there, add some things, I'll be doing that right now! I appreciate you taking the time to help me out as well. 
I'll let you know when.
So hey, that's good you got a few more readers on that story! Call it a free promotion!
So yay for that!
Overall I'm just glad it worked out. And yes! The little SoarJack hinting shout out! I know you like the pairing and I admit it's curious, so I decided to throw in that little something! That fanart is so cute, exactly what I was thinking of!
Ooh yes, that Rarity bit, I think she'd probably say something like that. XD To kind of have the "Oh, she's dancing happily with a stallion, that must mean she's in love!" kind of naivety and also the unawareness of the secret relationship and sexual preference. XD
Knock knock knock knockiy knock!
Thank you very much again! Glad you enjoyed it, I shall fix the bumps in the road, and I'm very glad to have been able to deliver something that has given sweet charms and lots of cuteness and love, and to be able to be integrated into the actual story. I'm so honoured!
Thanks for your feedback! 
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Well would have to be the cutest silliest Flutterdash story ever. It was 120% Awesome!
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and I look forward to any future stories that have scenes that have this overdoes of Flutterdash being cute. They totally seemed in character the whole way and the SoarinJack was GREAT! They do make a good potential couple (almost as good as SoarinFire… I ship Soarin' and AJ to both appealing alternatives. and it just so happened that SoarinJack worked well for this story.)
FTW!
All the way through I was laughing and crying gleefully it was almost too much. This makes me really want to do something with Crashing Angels in a later chapters that references this (like the part you said about them as fillies with Dash lying on top. I soooo want to use that
I think you could have come up with a few more cute names for them to mix it up a little as sometimes the constant use of their two main pet names just got a little repetitive. But I really can't complain as it was so enjoyable to read I was more than willing to overlook such minor issues.
The rest was so well written and cleverly crafted in your use of language you held me ensnared for the whole story.
I love the end where Pinkie thought they were doing something … more… (I think… thats what it came across like to me.)
For a 4k words long story (give or take a bit) it flew by so fast because it was so much fun. I'm going to have to recommend this to a lot of people as its just such a crazy read. You crammed in an almost unimaginable amount of cute. I like over exposure to cuteness
I have a surprise for you in about 3 hours time, once I've finished writing it. I hope you will enjoy.
Here's something I think 'Shy might also get Dash into doing
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...you had to post that.
Incoming cute-attack in 3....2...1...
KAWAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII DESUUUUU NEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
1429716 D'awww! You're too sweet! Thanks so very much!
And yeah, I'm actually REALLY bad with pet names. XD Just terrible, unless there's one that can be obvious. But the point was, especially since Twilight brought it up in Open To Interpretation, she got tired of it after over the tenth time. XD So I was capturing that in there. I have since re-written a few bits and added some stuff, so I hope it's working a bit more. X3
Oh my gosh, yes! Definitely use that adorable element! I read one story where filly Rainbow lay on top of filly Fluttershy, and it was sooooo cute! I just made that my headcanon now. x3 I can't wait to see your use of it! That'll be so cute!
Yeah, the point was to hint at sauciness, but without being blatant about it. XD It's up to the readers to interpret it that way!
Hee! So thank you again, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much, it means a lot to me!
D'awwww, what a cute drawing!! I love it! Yes! I can so see that happening. 
Oooohhh!!
I look forward to reading it!
Very cute. You should make a sequel!
1429949 What story was that? Can you remember?
And about the sauciness... I usually tend to get it and also find it funny when Flutterdash is involved.
1430059 I can! Kind of. XD It's in my favourites, a one-shot, and has an image screenshot of them as fillies. But I forget the title. Trust me though, it's in my favourites, for sure.
So do I!
Woo my picture + i love this story :3
OHNOYOUDIDN'T
I mean, you really did it! You wrote this! Aaaaaugh!
*dying from cuteness and wuff overload*
YES!
I swear, that was teeth rottingly cute. Is it weird that I could really see that happening? Like as canon? Meh whatever, FlutterDash woo!
That was Cuteness times 100! Uh oh.... Not again.....
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1430844 Well, Souldin has tried to write it within the canon of the show and it kind of leaks off from there! XD So, I tried hard to capture that spirit here and there!
1430896 Oh dear! XD Need some medicine?
I think Pinkie just keeps popping in in the hopes that she'll 'accidentally' catch them in an even more compromising position. Clearly, she has a voyeurism fetish.
So... sweet... I CAN'T TAKE IT! D'aww! Although the pet names were a bit repetitve, this is probably one of the most adorable stories I have ever read. Open to Interpretation has been on my Read Later list for a while and I had just managed to read it when this story popped up! It goes well with the canon of that story and compliments it superbly! Throughout most of the story, you had me smiling like an idiot at how adorable it was! Seriously well done!
And as always, FLUTTERDASH FTW
Alright, I have to say something real quick. That was... completely, and utterly, the most "smoochy" story I have ever read. I think this picture explains everything...
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Oh, you are too much! Wow, so I have a meme now? XD
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Wow! Awesome. 
Thanks by the way! x3 That's just what I do, it's my specialty.
I'm swimming in a sea of saccharine... and it is GLORIOUS. <3
Oh the hilarity. I approve.
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I think I got
DIABEETUS
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This has got to be the most sickeningly, disgustingly, generally-puking-rainbows-in-all-directions-y piece of schmaltz I have ever read, and it was glorious!!
I think I have diabetes now.
read open to interpretation.
read this story.
I wanna hugz fluttershy and rainbow dash. I WANT IT NOW! oh wait.....unfortunatly no amount of temper-tantrum will manifest them into reality......................
why reality haz to have laws? its not fair!
Lolz ok, thats enough, but seriously, this was epicly cute and does manage to get the blood flowin to mah feels. good work!
note: at least the blood can get to mah feels, its not like the vessels have all been choked up by the excess glucose because i have diabeetus or somethin
Ugh ! sory for having taken so long to post a comment yesterday
, but i just got my leave from the hospital, witch i have been brought to after my brother found me incouscious in front of my computer. It seems that I have passed out cause my sugar level was to hight.
Anyway great job.
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Don't be sorry. I could never hold something like that against you. I'm just so sorry to hear that, but I'm glad you're doing better. 
Thank you for your feedback!
Please excuse me while my head explodes
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Diabetic... shock. Must. Find. Insulin!
i think i got a cavity from all the sweetness...
The cuteness! It's too much.
Remembered this song while reading
I think it goes well with your stories. A.K.A FlutterDash Love!
And remember to keep being a
STAR!
d'awwwwwness...... too.......much......to......handle.......can't.......control.......nnnnnnggggggggAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!
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You actuallly made a flutterdash story based arround snugling and cuddling
i guess RD and fluttershy have a few things to explain the next morning 
It was just damn cute. Luckily i remembered to turn on my cutie-machine to prevent me from cutie-overloading. i would have been dead without it.
The funniest part were Pinkie Pie
time to rate it.
1 star, 1 green thumb and 6 out of 6 spikes. oh, wait i think i will use flutterdash instead.
1436987 Oh, but there is a level of tantrum that will manifest them... PLUSHIES! I've got my nibbly-wibbly all done, but she still needs her snuggy-wuggy to sit with.
...seriously, I don't think I'll ever be able to look at Rainbow and Fluttershy again without thinking of those names
1431169 Pinkie is totally a voyeur. It's practically canon with how she automatically knows Fluttershy and Rarity's secrets when Twilight promises to keep them, and has the whole town's scrapbooks memorized to help Cranky find his lost love
Not to mention how determined she is to snoop through his stuff 
A couple of my teeth started hurting partway through that. Seriously. I'm not sure if the story was too sweet, or if that chip that spiked one of my teeth earlier caused it... I'm betting on the story. It was soooooooo sweet!
It's sooo fluffeh!
Well I think I just died a little.....
....from CUTENESS OVERLOAD!
Fantastic, another part to open to interpretation! Absolutly love the first story, and now this
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Loved it, especially Pinkie's Bursting in and her reaction. Gahh pinkie keep on not understanding context it is ADORABLE! And sometimes frustrating.
Any case Thanks for a lovable read!
1602886 It was so cute that the resulting diabeetus heart attack made my eyes burst out of my skull.
Sweet Celestia... that picture...
The story was just so...
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I cannot express how awesome this is...
On a off note, thank god Regidar isn't on this thread yet
My heart exploded.
So cuuuute!