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SwiperTheFox


This sneaky fox, always clad in a blue mask and gloves, has long been a bane of unwary travelers with loose accouterments.

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Sweetie Belle has long wondered what secrets Scootaloo hides in her diary. The young pegasus has spent idle moments jotting down notes on pieces of paper before keeping them close, making romantic gazes at the blank sky. Finally, with both Scootaloo and Applebloom occupied, Sweetie has her chance.

This is a hopefully light-hearted jab of me against ImJustAnotherBrony. It's also a sequel to my previous story "Cutie Mark Crusader Fanfiction Writers Go!". Thanks for reading.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 25 )

I'm confused.

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I concur!

This reminds me, along with Ice King, never read Scootaloo's fanfiction!



PROSTATE DROPPING?!?!?!?!?

This makes me want to take a shit,I can't even finish it.

You had me at prostate... Hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

I see from the comments that the story sort of had it's desired effect :pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

I... what?

But... There was no actual... But... I don't even... UGH. I hate you. :(

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I warned you in the tags that this was [random]! :scootangel:

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Oh, now you use logic? :ajbemused:

:derpytongue2::rainbowkiss:

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Logic? no silly filly :rainbowlaugh:
no, he uses ponies, much more complicated and cuter :pinkiehappy:

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*pats your head* it's okay little foal :pinkiesmile:
go over to Pinkie and learn some "logic" :pinkiecrazy:

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ohdearlord. I think I'll pass. :derpytongue2::pinkiesmile:

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good little foal, now back to class with Cheerilee :rainbowkiss:

I, uh.... I'm pretty sure I missed something, but I'm too afraid to read it again more closely. For fear of losing what little remains of my sanity, you see: didn't have much to begin with.

Little filly crush on Derpy. Cute.

The prostate and transformation stuff is disturbing, but otherwise it was interesting.

cool story:raritywink:

Pretty good. I enjoyed the weird story, and Scootaloo's terrible grammar was a nice touch, but I didn't really understand what happened between scenes. Did Scootaloo forgive Sweetie Belle? I honestly wasn't sure. And, I must ask; will there be another one? I would read a third entry to the series.

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I can look closely for you, if you’d like?

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