What starts as a small spell turns into disaster as Twilight and Rarity must find an ancient goddess to fix everything. With Luna's guidance, their journey begins as they are brought to the island of Sapios; a land disconnected to the rest of the world by war, death, and secrets that lay within the home of the surviving humans. Now they must search across the dangerous land, dodging Seekers, and creating new friendships to uncover what it means to be human.
This came to me as an idea in which humans were part of the world to begin with. Having their own civilization and guardian.
Chapters (8)
This is actually a very good story, and don't let anyone tell you otherwise. It has problems, but I don't care - I am really enjoying the idea of a kind and capable Rarity (with a bow!), Twilight struggling to cope without her magic, and an aggressive, militant Luna exploring a mysterious medieval human kingdom. Keep writing!
Sounds interesting..
Faved^^
good so far...continue.
I have not forgotten about Hands and Arms. I am still trying to make a decent Ch5. I sadly do not have a definite date of release.
EDIT: Released... Now to do schoolwork and get Ch6 done.
I've rewritten Chapter 1 if anyone cares.
What is with the lack of comments now-a-days! Every story I've read today, seriously?
Anyway, Twi and Rarity seem in cannon enough, good pacing, just a few little grammar hic-ups here and there, I was entertained.
Sides that I'm interested in reading more, I really like the hook you have going on. I'd like to see more of them getting used to there human bodies, living without the aid of magic, and getting used to how differently they may react to a situation given there new instinks.
Man! Every time I read a chapter I can always find that one little slip up 'hehe', don't worrie though, if I have to try so hard there aren't that many right?
Having both Luna and Spike come along is really going to chance the dynamic I had previously in my mind, now I'm rather curious about how spike is going to react if the girls need to change clothes ^///^
Most of all I wonder if Rarity is going to learn from this, or if Twilight is going to go through some kind of mental crisis when she has no control over anything.
I'm really loving this story, I had so many things I wanted to say about but I was so intrigued I took my time and forgot some. Umm...Twi and Rarity seem to agree (nod their heads) with Luna an awful lot...can't think of why that bothers me, but it does. Oh! I'm really happy that your telling the story from both view points, the possibilities that telling both groups stories arise are fascinating.
I just now noticed a 'thing" I keep reading in stories, its the "We have things to do, but we're going to wait to do them" trope, I get you can't stall out on explaining to much, but man I'm just so engrossed with whats happening it kills me every time the story skips large chunks of time, I just wanna know more RIGHT NOW!
Is this dead?