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Ebonyglow


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I haven't really read fics which are in the second person, but this has been a really positive introduction to them!
The face fucking lasted more than I would have thought, but that is anything but a flaw because all of it was quite hot!

Obviously the transition into a mindless bitch was incredibly appealing, and I enjoyed how Anon Mare's defiance came in bursts, I found it unique!

Really good fic!

Gorgeous as always!!

Is it bad I want a sequel??

Comment posted by DragonKiller345 deleted May 19th

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human turned into a pony

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We really need a sequel to this where Anon uses Celestia to rule Equestria and make his own laws while the other ponies like Luna or Twilight Sparkle get suspicious and maybe try to stop him but ultimately fail and fall under his control as well.

Could also have an ending where it turns out Discord was behind the headset all along and with a snap of his fingers all of the hypnosis is undone but with the memories of what was done to them intact.

I imagine this could lead into a really funny ending where Anon gets a taste of his own medicine and gets hypnotized himself.

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bro does not read

Comment posted by DragonKiller345 deleted May 19th

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Good idea but I honestly don’t think Discord will undo all of it, or if he does, he won’t put the memories back. I think it was finding more funny ponies to be obedient slut except for Fluttershy.

Hypnotizing Celestia into a slut is a bold choice~

Una
Una #12 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

Good story! Would love to see a pony he hypnotized still have it's free will caused by a malfunction with his cheep headset. It leaves the pony unable to control their body as he controls/impregnates/ them. How would they react being forced into pregnancy. sort of dark now that I'm thinking about it. Lol

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Yeah, but what is Celestia's tax policy.

Zake #15 · 2 weeks ago · · ·

lol its amazing its amusing that Anon mare had more ability to resist the the mind control then celestial.

“Ahhh ~ Master, our foal is coming soon! Your slut’s first baby! Will you fill me with another one, after?”

Ngl after this bit i was half expecting him mentioning something about giving her a fertility potion for being such a good girl.

Celestia summoned magic in her horn, slowly levitating the visor off her face. Her eyes were closed, as she smiled softly. Placing the device to the side, her eyes fluttered open, revealing the hearts that shimmered within them. She twerked harder, her juices coating your cock as you slid against her nethers.

Dang that part is hot... Would have personally made it so the wanting to be annons broodmare is her dirty little secret with the hypnosis, rather than the same commands pony anon got, that way no one would be the wiser. (Also to keep the visor a secret from others that don't know about it)

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Woops, forgot to mention, the only way that the fem anon part could be hotter is if she got her free will back and still went chasing male annons cock. My mind keeps liking the idea of her slowly being un hypnotized and being extremely conflicted about wanting more still, also part of her resistance was a mix of being afraid about "no cock like horse cock" and "human dick is best dick for horses" etc. etc.

Is this new?

You snickered, taking in just how far she had fallen from her usual self. If she wanted it so badly, might as well let her have it. After tall, she had finally submitted to you, surrendering the pony she thought she was for the pure bliss of mindlessly serving you. She deserved to be rewarded for finally accepting her purpose.

I think you mean after all not tall

loved this story! would also love to see a part 2 or more involving celestia, luna, eris, and whoever else the guy manages to get the helmet on

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Im guessing that eris/discord is the one who made the visor. Either way, i agree with the sequel idea.

I feel horrible for reading this while high.

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Same, though twilight also needs to submit.

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Don’t pretend she doesn’t love it also don’t pretend you don’t love it.

This was great!
Mind Control, Breeding, Preggo shenanigans etc. Couldn't have asked for more ^^

TLF

Really well done as always!!~ I always love to read new stories from you!~They never disappoint, and this one was not the exception!~

Y1R

There must be a sequel, a story like that can't end like this.... MOAR

After all of these stories, an Anon has finally conquered Celestia

Kinda got the impression Celestia didn't get brain washed and was just playing along because she wanted it.

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