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Ebonyglow


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How righteously poggers!

Great job, can't wait for the next one!

I was curious as to how the Main Six would be applied in this story. Even more curious how Anon may outsmart or overpower them.

Good, comrade Pinkie Pie is moving to intercept. But just in case...
AC-130 ready for deployment.

Looks like Sunset's on the menu next.

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I think you're missing the point of these kinds of stories.

I'm going to call it now. Sunset will be harder to break and might be difficult to change, but they'll exploit a chink in that armor of hers.

TLF

This was so hot to read~ And I have a sneaky suspicion of what mare is going to get out of that mirror~ Let's hope that anon and his slaves are able to not look suspicious until they find a way to enslave this mysterious unicorn~

Starlight giggled, rolling her eyes and pawning his forearm with a hoof. “Oh Master, are you sure you read the entry carefully?” She levitated the book over to them, pointing at the middle of the spell’s passage. “They stated there was a heat spell that could be used in association with this. I’m gonna add it to the suit, but crank it up several times for the best results. Can’t risk not making her your slave today!”

I don't think pawning is used correctly here

I spelt pawning wrong twice.

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yeah, wasn't fond of the usage there either. wrote the opening to this story at like 5 am so sleepy brain go brrrrr

I was very excited to read this story. Thank you very much for writing this!

You really have a thing for mares in tight bodysuits, don'tcha? :rainbowwild:

... Oh well, can't say I blame you. Great continuation of this series! My favorite part remains the unconventional harem member picks - it's been a good long while since I saw a Lightning Dust fic.

And Celestia's anti-human executive order to all ponykind adds some legitimate intrigue to the proceedings. It gives Anon some righteous "stick it to the mare" anger to spur on his mare-collecting quest. I'm definitely interested to see how that side of the story plays out!

I loved this chapter

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Ah twilight sparkle from another world could be nice, at first I thought it would be chrysalis. Ohh that could be very interesting.

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Oh that could be interesting I thought it would be twilight from another world.

Comment posted by Clawfoot deleted Nov 22nd, 2022

It was even better, than with Mayer. Mmmmm.... Can't wait to see fourth chapter, I anticipate very orange unicorn with huge potential. :trollestia:

a magnificent prospect, looking forward to reading more.

Both disturbing and great at the same time! Thanks for the story! Can’t wait for the sequel!

Una

Loved it! hopefully a pregnant possibly in the future
i hope. Lol

Hoping for more comments

Really excited for the next one. I am super curious as to why Celestia forbid mares from even dating him. Hoping it's something funny like "She wanted him all for herself" or something. I'll be really disappointed if it's something like she just really thought he was that disgusting.

Tapping her hoof against the ground, Lightning Dust released an annoyed groan. It was bad enough she couldn’t find Rainbow Dash and rub her new achievements and skills in the prismatic pest’s face, but now she apparently had to go through an entire procedure with Ponyville’s mayor.

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These stories are beyond amazing, I can’t wait for the sequels!

The lap dance got me actin UP

The Sun will set upon her two glorious yellow moons.....

“There is actually somepony else that can match my magic, and it seems they’re about to pay us a convenient visit~”

Uh oh, looks like Sunset's coming!

Well shit... i was so caught up in trying to figure out who it was that had left the book i had actually forgoten about the pinkie promise.

Dammit the story is getting better and better with every chapter and continuation of the story now I’m interested in the plot and the clop.

He pouted his lip, gesturing towards a mirror in the middle of the room. “And what’s that thing for? It just looks like a regular old mirror. Does it tell you who’s the fairest of them all or something?”

Gold tier reference right there

these unknown carnal cravings of hers to get the best of her.

I wonder what will happen if a blank flank foal was treated to this spell. Would the foal get the heart and chains as their cutie mark? I would like to see that on Kettle Corn or Ginger Snaps.

🎶Two little mares made up Anon's menagerie
A pegasus joined in and now there are three🎶

Do love the long buildup and struggle here.

Also, the way I hear Lightning saying "It’s Master’s cock" is really funny to me for whatever reason

“What? Of…of course I’m fine!” she blurted out, stamping her foot and holding in the groans her body was eager to release. “Why wouldn’t I be? It’s time to perform! We’ve gotta show these ponies what fun really looks like!”

Hoof not foot. Enjoying the story BTW

Is he going to go after Celestia eventually?

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