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Ebonyglow
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Ebonyglow
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I don't always read G5
But when I do, it's from Ebony
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Funnily enough the only nsfw g5 stuff I’ve read is from you lmao
This has spiked my curiosity for the previous series and what will happen in it XD
I need to know!
So much teasing and foreshadowing XD
This is really amazing though!
Sunny foolishly trusting Anon and becoming his is super hot~
And him commanding Sunny and railing her for the first time is also very hot~
He's going to have so much fun with this book, and I am excited for Izzy experiencing this bliss!
i like teasing those of you who are invested in the uncommon practices series if you can’t tell
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I can certainly see that XD
Reeeee XD
Huh… was not expecting this. But hey, this is actually the first G5 stuff I’ve ever read, since I lost interest in watching the show after G4 ended. Wish I understood more about the world it’s set in and how it’s different, but eh, it’s still an amazing story! Can’t wait for the next one, Ebony!
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Since Hasbro won’t market G5 well I’ll just have to do it myself via smut
Thanks for the comment, and yeah, G5 is an interesting situation to say the least. Has cute mares tho and I can work with that.
Nice
Mind control is bad, mkay.
Well that's an interesting way to hint at the possible end to Uncommon Practices. Though I suspect this Anon has a simpler path to final victory plus only one full Alicorn to deal with eventually.
Out of curiosity will this have spoilers related to the main story, because I know you said they were related
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nah, just vague foreshadowing
Always love the custom cover art you get done for these chapters, almost as good as the stories✌️
Lookin forward to the next 1.
Hoo. You're really good at writing mind control.
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Do i need to get Horsey sauce from Arby's again!
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Don't read about it, then. Dumbass.
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that's one of my specialties!
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To be fair, portraying it explicitly as dark magic makes this fic considerably better about acknowledging that fact than the actual show tended to.
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i.imgflip.com/3ibepz.jpg
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Now kiss
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Opposites attract~
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In the interest of playing Devil's Advocate, I would like to point out that the story doesn't portray this as a positive thing, instead making it quite clear (in my opinion) that the protagonist is using it to take advantage of Sunny.
Sunny, Sunny...
(sigh) Don't you know if you constantly tease our guy with your thicc, bouncy, round ass cheeks, flash that sweet honeypot and perky ponut at him, you're going to get a dick in you? It's just that simple.
NOW look at you: cum on your face, cum down your throat, cum all over you...and that's only the beginning!
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bingo
I always have any mind control story I do have a brief focus on the morals of the entire thing. Obviously it isn’t right, but oftentimes Anon (in each of them) just gives in to his desire, or has some outside force effect him.
In regards to another big project I’m working on, involving Sombra and the Mane 6, it makes sense for him to not have a similar dilemma since he’s downright evil from the get-go. He’s already seen as a villain and monster, so his actions aren’t too unexpected
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You just know Sunny’s got a rump and then some on her
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I noticed that, and I applaud you for that. So many of these sorts of stories go from 0 to 100 without considering the ethics of the thing. Another interesting touch I noticed was Sunny trying to resist, given that a lot of writers have the mind controlled character give in ridiculously quickly.
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i think i have a thing where i have to have some build-up in all my stories, even outside of the mind control ones. if you go through even my more vanilla stories, i just like to pace it before getting to the spicy parts. the character's thoughts, actions, and more leading to something after a bit feels a bit more satisfying i guess? especially with mind control, you gotta focus on the thoughts of both parties involved imo
though i do worry my stuff can be a bit too wordy or long at times
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Not at all! If anything this is the right sort of length.
A++ and glad you're back to my favorite kind of stories, the MC kind <3
Your other stories are great too this is just my personal fav kind
You can't actually clap your cheeks. It's anatomically impossible for humans. You'd have to have an enormous ass to actually clap it. Not to mention that you'd a also need some muscles in it actually do the clapping, but if you clench them, then the ass wouldn't do any actual sound. Overall, ass clapping is a trope that exist only in media and memes.
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We know, WE KNOW! But it makes the story more FUN!
Stop sucking away all the FUN, Fun Sucker!
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You also can’t fuck a sentient, colorful, magic-wielding, naive, friendly horse - but who am I to talk amirite
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You think clapping is fun? And they call me the wierdo. I hope you never landed in an airplane with those people. You know which, the ones that clap at the end for no reason.
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Wait...you've been on a flight where people tried clapping their ass cheeks when the plane landed?! THAT sounds like MY kind of party!
Must've been a Vegas flight...those degenerates will do anything for a good time!
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Stay thirsty, my friends.
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Are you even listening?! Well I suppose reading really, but that's besides the point. I just said you CAN'T clapp your cheeks! It's not Las Vegas that you'll find people clapping, it's Prague... Seriously we from Czech Republic just do that a lot for some reason. NOT CHEEKS CLAPPING BTW. I fear the day Cheek Clapping Guy arrives in Prague.
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Wow. YOU. Are fun to mess with!
Of COURSE I knew what you meant...and yes, I've been on those flights where people lose their shit when the plane lands, as if they've never been on one of those new-fangled aereo-planes afore...hyuk!
Sometimes it's annoying, but if we've been through heavy turbulence and the flight was a nightmare, then yeah...I totally get the need to express gratitude for a safe landing.
Missing a question mark.
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Fun fact: You have a bigger chance of dying when going to the airport than during the flight.
I was hoping the mind control will be more slow and subtle with Anon taking advantage of Sunny's naivity to make things work.
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My other MC stories might be more your cup of tea then, specifically Prismatic Pest!
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Do you intend to continue the stories that take place in the past?
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Of course!
Ebony, I love your content so much. Seriously. Keep it up.
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thank ya!
So I'm guessing it turns out they've done this plenty of times before, hid the tome away, and made themselves forget every time? A is definitely Anon and S is definitely Sunny.
Looking forward to the next chapters!
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That’s a fun theory, but not quite right!
A. is the Anon from my Uncommon Practices series and S. is Starlight, the first pony he claims at the start of that series of stories
The book is the same one that Anon used, and it’s why there’s so many tools to make it easier to use - since the former Anon used it heavily
DAYM this story was HOT. I loved the descriptions and buildup. Hyped for the sequel.
While I was reading it I thought of a scenario where they have to cuddle for heat, him being naked because his clothes got wet or something, her on top, with his erection sandwiched between her tits, her complaining about it before being shut up with the fact that anon is surrounded by hot pussy all day and can't get any. She feels bad and lets him in between her folds just this once, and gets her mind blown up on penetration.
Is no one else going to point out the fact that the previous owner of this tome is Anon from the past, and that the unicorn mentioned in one of the notes is Starlight?