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Shining Prince Percival


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Fluttershy has always wanted to be a mother. But what lengths will she go before she feels whole?

(Inspired and co-produced by Proteus-92. AND YES I HAVE HIS PERMISSION TO DO THIS!)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 22 )

Twilight's probably going to kill her when this is all over, but it seems to be an interesting start. It also reminds me of the third season of Digimon, with Lopmon and Terriermon going through this (though they were more living dolls, and didn't have a serum).

I survived Pattycakes, I'll survive this.

Prologue not Proluge
And I love this story! Fluttershy being crazy amuses me. As long as there isn't any graphic-sexual scenes, I'm tracking this, 4.5/5 :heart:
96571 I agree. It's a very interesting concept, indeed.

96769 thank you. I didn't see that typo. And what do you mean sex scenes?:rainbowderp: she just wants to be a mom.:pinkiesick:

96826
AS LONG... just saying that because at the beginning it sounded like a clop-fic... There goes my perverted mind again!:trollestia:

Tracking. I wanna see where this goes.

Rainbow Dash not Rainbowdash
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Great Chapter! :rainbowkiss: Can't wait 'til next one!

Re-read it too... there are errors scattered here and there:unsuresweetie:

Sorry I was a little rushed in writing today. Very busy lately:fluttershysad:

:facehoof: this whole story premise......just :facehoof: good job sir....you have just managed to unnerve a madman.....good job to your sir:pinkiecrazy:

Wow, where is this going? very original idea, small spelling errors but a solid 4.5.

The best part is that I have no idea where this s going! It's a new idea and I am enjoying it.

Keep it up, good sir.

:yay::yay::yay::yay:

It's a good story, not gonna lie, but haters gonna hate, why does Fluttershy want a kid? Doesn't she basically treat her animals like kids? This is just like your last story, the plot comes from nowhere, and I do it for the plot man. I'm pretty disinterested in this story.

Just a few things I've noticed:
and that ment nobody (meant)
friends in the doorstep (at)
got ate by a furocios animal (eaten) (ferocious)

Let's see were you're taking this story.

This came from Warming Up by Proteus-92. You sure you have his permission?

Can't wait for more.

Ya based this on 'Pattycakes' right? :twilightsheepish:

364248 No, I actually don't know what that is.:derpytongue2: I just thought it up when the god-like warming up got to spike's nightmare. The end result is what you see

370321 Ah, I see.

Great work anywany ^^

373256 Oh god, I read pattycakes:pinkiesick:! This is not, NOT, a pattycake type fic:pinkiesick: P.S. I hope to update soon.

860200 Can't wait and sorry for the point out.

More chapters please

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