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Luna is a anxious pony,
coming to terms with her trauma that had formed Nightmare Moon.
After 1,000 years on the moon, her majestys own creation, Luna attempts to adjust to the new pony world around her.
As time goes on,
Luna develops a deep love for her close friend, Twilight Sparkle.
Luna writes in a journal every night to what she wishes she could tell Twilight.
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The last TwiLuna story I remember being created was back in November 2023, I think this might be the first to be created in 2024.
I hope to see this story completed and will be reading every chapter that gets released, keep up the good work.
And congrats on your first story!
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Thank you! Two new chapters will be posted later tonight!
<3
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Can't wait!
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Two new chapters posted!
Maybe for someone like Cadance but for Twilight who saves the world, Equestria, and the Crystal Empire, it's more of a responsibility than a reward, especially with the immortal bit and then there is fighting with Tyrek in season 4 which basically proves my point but that hasn't happened yet sooo....
Also I think this is the first story that pointed out that Luna is a lesbian, in most other stories people just assume that she's Bisexual, especially since in those stories it also mentions she had Stallion lovers along with Mare lovers.
One of the reasons why I like this relationship.
I like both Twilight X Celestia and Twilight X Luna but the second is more my favorite.
It also seems fitting, Twilight come before the night and her cutie mark kinda represents the night sky and her name is the stars that Sparkle at Twilight before Night, not to mention her coat is the color of Twilight.
I wonder if the person who made the design and name for Twilight Sparkle knew what they were doing, there's way to many coincidences.
My kind of place.
Usually it takes 3 chapters just for Twilight to call Princess Celestia just "Celestia" in other stories, interesting it only takes 2 paragraphs for Luna in this story.
Definitely an interesting chapter, I wonder when Luna will confess her feelings and if Twilight has feelings for Luna at this point in time, although it is a possibility considering Twilight could have asked Cadance to teach her how to fly since she was born a Pegasus and could have asked Celestia who is over 1000 years old and is her mentor.
I'm so ready for the next chapter already I'm Finna burst!
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That means a lot to me!
This is actually my first story I have written in over 2 years, so I am a little rusty!
I’m mostly working on gothic poems, so this is a little new for me!
I will definitely update soon
Well now I really hope Twilight has the same feelings for Luna when she does eventually confess because if Twilight doesn't, things are gonna get awkward...
If you ever confess your love to someone, always remember that rejection is a possibility and the one you love might not return your feelings, it could always happen and the sooner you realize that getting rejected is a possibility, the less it hurts in case said possibility happens.
Obviously, because this has a romance tag and it's confirmed it's a TwiLuna story obviously means Twilight and Luna are together at the end of the story, but we still don't know when they get together and if Twilight returns her feelings right away, were mostly looking at this through Luna's perspective and not Twilight's so we have no idea what she is thinking.
Also Luna needs to chill with her dreams, don't want this turning rated Mature, do we?
I wish my dreams we atleast half as interesting as Luna's, I rarely dream, atleast average of 2-5 times a year.
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Oh so that explains the layout of the paragraphs, ya I was actually questioning why the layout of the story and paragraphs was like that but didn't ask because it might have come off as rude.
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Yeahhh! The layout of the story definitely hints at the writer (aka me) being a poet. I'm so used to writing on heavily spaced out paragraphs that I forget how to layout an actual story! But I can definitely fix my paragraphs in the future if it bothers you too much haha!
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It doesn't bother me. Personally I think it's unique.
Others might not like it as much, I don't really care, it's your story.
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Greetings! New updates posted just today!
:)
Greetings!
Next update will be posted this week on Friday!
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I'm excited.
I wonder if Twilight will show up.
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Unfortunately, I won’t be able to update the story next week due to my job,
but I promise I will update as soon as possible once I find time!
Much love
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Take all the time you need.
Based off the last couple paragraphs, I don't blame Luna for turning into Nightmare Moon in this AU.
In fact, 1000 years of banishment? Jeez that's harsh, especially by her own sister, I'm surprised Luna isn't mentally insane with being alone on the moon for 1000 years for litterly nothing to do but to talk to yourself.
Makes sense.
Does Celestia know about this? From what I'm understanding, Celestia only knows about her neglecting her own sister and how everypony saw Luna as a monster or saw her as useless and questioning why she is needed or simply not paying attention to her or her night sky that she works so hard on.
Was her father better?
Also what was that other chapter, I saw that so don't deny it.
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Hello!
About the other chapter, I had realized some errors and decided to unpublish it to fix it! But it'll be posted again in a few minutes LOL.
And also, Celestia only knows bits and pieces of what their mother had done to Luna and how Luna was treated by their mother.
Their father, however, tried to include Luna and make her feel just as loved as Tia was.
If you have any more questions, please do ask! ❤️
I’m loving this story so much every single day I come back to check for a new chapter!
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Thank you! That’s very sweet!
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Np I love the writing and everything and this inspires my Twiluna comic series I’m working!