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Rarity's Rules of TLC

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A personal short story about the consequences of perfectionism, and my first ever published work on FimFic! Hope you guys enjoy.

Rarity is making dresses for her customers as usual, but something is wrong this time. She keeps scrapping and scrapping her work, unable to view her work as complete. Maybe she's way too hard on herself. Maybe there is such a thing as too much TLC? The cycle must be broken!

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marmalado

marmalado #1 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

This was a very sweet story, and pretty good for your first ponefic! Looking forward to (hopefully) seeing more from you. Needs a bit of cleaning up editing-wise, though (and I will happily lend my editing services to you if needed ).

And also, welcome to FiMFic! Glad to see another Odd Squad fan on this site.

jamiejammers

jamiejammers #2 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

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Heh thank you so much! I wrote this fic in a bit of a nauseous haze so the quality kind of nosedives in the end, hehe. I jusr wanted to finish something though! Hopefully I’ll write some more.

What’s Odd Squad though?

Gavier

Gavier #3 · 3 weeks ago · 1 · ·

Eyyyy, it got approved!

also, that's a very good Sweetie. I love the assertiveness

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #4 · 3 weeks ago · · ·

This was a decent story, especially considering it's your first. You had some good characterization, and some good prose. It wasn't very ambitious, but I'm sure you'll work your way up to stories like that. Good job, and keep at it!

JWR