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Werescoots

Every full moon, Scootaloo’s mother is left with no choice but to chain her own daughter up. If she were to be free then there would be untold carnage.

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ThePeer

ThePeer #1 · 2 weeks ago · 4 · ·

Its always nice to see a new author on the platform. This is one of those things where you don't realize you loved the idea until you interact with it. The idea of Scootaloo being a werewolf? I loved that idea the second I found this.

I do think the writing style could have some water sprayed on it, for example by adding more metaphors or similes, but that is nothing that can't be fixed with good ol' practice. This is better then the first stuff I wrote (As of today unpublished), so don't be discouraged from writing in the future.

Anyhow, welcome to FIMfiction! Hope you enjoy your journey here.

Bronycommander