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English is not my language, so I apologize in advance for how poorly my comment may be written. Especially punctuation. I also have to admit that even for me, who knows little English, the author's writing style seems very good and pleasant.

I'm pleasantly surprised by this story. I mean, at first I thought it was just another "stupid incest story with ponies and a couple of sex scenes" of which there are quite a few on the Internet. However, the last two chapters showed me that there is much more depth to this story than it might seem. After reading this chapter, previous events take on new colors. If I read the first chapters mostly out of boredom, now I'm really interested in what will happen next.
I would also like to know if there are any plans to develop the character of Chrysalis in this work? I mean, will she undergo any internal changes under the influence of Shining and Flurry, or are you (the author) planning to leave her as an incorrigible villain?

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The ending might surprise you. There will be an update soon.