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Review: Flurry Heart’s Dating Adventure

Tags: Sex, Fetish, Romance, Random, Slice of Life

Summary: Incest porn… Oh my.

Review:  I have to say this is good so far it doesn’t have an ending yet.  The grammar, flow, and idea are pretty good, The letter for the first chapter is pretty right which is 100% correct you do need a double entry there.(Enter gap)

The rest is also good… However, I have to say most of the characters are pretty well done so far… nothing out of the ordinary.  I give this at least a 6/10 because I still haven’t read the ending of this fiction. After all, it’s incomplete.

That's fair. College finals are finished so I'll be working on this again very soon.

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I hope that it goes well with your finals.

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I got my grades back already, I got an A in all my classes. I hope you'll update the review when the story is finished.

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you have my word that if I live and still breathing... it also depends on how long I'll be gaming for a couple of days. I have update the incompletion stories when the story was finished it will take time.... Which means I'll have to reread the story from beginning to end.