As everyone knows, Cozy Glow was defeated by the combined forces of Equestria and beyond, and subsequently turned to stone for her crimes.
Except she wasn’t. Someone else was.
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Will there be a sequel?
Now I'm curious about the aftermath, will students in the school accept this Cozy Glow? and how can she fit in
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No plans on a sequel currently, but you never know! Maybe I'll write one someday.
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Yeah, that's definitely something Cozy Glow would have to deal with - all anyone sees when they look at her is the villainous clone. But Cozy is determined to make friends, and by Celestia, she'll do whatever it takes! (...In a non-evil way.)
Yeah, this concept is really interesting (the personality-warping of the pool is a great explanation for show Cozy's behavior), but it would have worked better as a longer-form story. You could explore Cozy dealing with the prejudice she faces, her differences from the clone, her studies at the school, and just give more time for characters' reactions to breathe.
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Thanks for the advice!
I also really liked this concept, and for sure there are a lot of implications and elements that could be further explored. Her experience in the School of Friendship would be a lot like Sunset Shimmer's in Rainbow Rocks, I think, except Cozy didn't actually do anything. Frustration abound for all.
Nonetheless, despite being Cozy Not-Evil Good-Pony, she remains a skilled tactician (looking at you, rook cutie mark) and will no doubt get what she wants in the end, one way or another - just in a less psychotic fashion than her clone.
Merci, J’ai aussi beaucoup aimé ce concept comme sur fellors