I have two cats, and one of them bites my feet when he's happy. That's all you need to know
In the beginning, there was nothing. Then there was something. This something combined to create the first alicorn. This alicorn went on to create the universe, stars, planets, and Equestria, and eventually ponies as well. This is the story of Caelestis, the first ever alicorn, and the world and creatures she created.
This is my first ever fic, so tell me what you think!!
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I saw that Calvin and Hobbes reference. Thumbs up all the way across the sky.
This is an interesting storyline so far, but it does move quite quickly. Throwing additional plot elements into the mix would help to change things up a bit and give length to the story.
Other than grammatical fixes and little changes here and there, this is actually a great story! Keep up the good work.
Nice story.Too bad it will get disliked for alicorn OC.
>First fan fic
>Alicorn OC fic
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And just what the bloody hell made you think that was a good idea? How do people not know how disliked Alicorn OCs are in this fandom by now? Hell, there was a crappy parody about alicorn fics on here like a couple of hours ago.
The fact that you create an Alicorn oc and made a whole background story is good. But the fact of "creating the universe" is not a background story. It just makes your oc the most powerful thing in the existence itself and that's why peoples don't like it. Sometimes, a weakness is the strong part of a story.
(ps learn to spell or buy a new keyboard, because 3 errors in 3 lines is a little much)