96718 Dude wwwwwwhhhhhhyyyyyyy she you shoulda done it to her people are to nice when it comes to this sorta thing and her plus it would been intresting if you had made her use the stare during it.
Dang. I was really hoping for some good old fashioned Applejack rape. Any chance you can rope that in here somehow? Perhaps Twilight finds Applejack and fixes her all up or something? No bloody sex please.
Dang. I was really hoping for some good old fashioned Applejack rape. Any chance you can rope that in here somehow? Perhaps Twilight finds Applejack and fixes her all up or something? No bloody sex please.
The 'I'll spare Fluttershy the horrors' line felt really, really weird.
I'm not saying that it was a bad idea to have the story go that way, but I would have written it so that Fluttershy just walks somewhere else in the Castle and he doesn't see her. He doesn't even think about her. I don't really like that he stopped and went: "Fluttershy?" "Nah!" as its own little bit.
Maybe if he had put forth more effort before, he could have been a real lady killer.
IDK about anyone else, but I'm not sure if I should take the work "killer" literally or not.
98610 Fluttershy becoming a super saiyan... boy, wouldn't that be something?
"You are the worst bully in the entire universe! I will defeat you, and you will never be able to hurt another being ever again!!! Um, that is... if that's OK with you, I mean."
96518
Thank you for pointing that out!
oooohh i wonder what midnight has in store for twillight
THANK GOD YOU WILL LEAVE FLUTTERSHY OUT OF THIS!!!
Or else I would personally kill Midnight.
96712
Yeah, I knew that Fluttershy fans would come find me if I did!
96718 Dude wwwwwwhhhhhhyyyyyyy she you shoulda done it to her people are to nice when it comes to this sorta thing and her plus it would been intresting if you had made her use the stare during it.
why'd Fluttershy get out?!?! the fuck is this soft spot?! whatever...
Dang. I was really hoping for some good old fashioned Applejack rape. Any chance you can rope that in here somehow? Perhaps Twilight finds Applejack and fixes her all up or something? No bloody sex please.
Dang. I was really hoping for some good old fashioned Applejack rape. Any chance you can rope that in here somehow? Perhaps Twilight finds Applejack and fixes her all up or something? No bloody sex please.
just an idea
how about midnight still go after flutter but then she uses stare and goes super saiyan on him
96718 Yup,you bet.
96718
*Slowly lowers grenade machine gun* You got lucky...no one bucks with and survives.
You said "dawned his armor"; its donned.
96712
*cough* You know that I should kill him if this happened...*cough*
98610
I APPROVE 29.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lwkk5wR6dv1qcfgllo1_500.gif
The 'I'll spare Fluttershy the horrors' line felt really, really weird.
I'm not saying that it was a bad idea to have the story go that way, but I would have written it so that Fluttershy just walks somewhere else in the Castle and he doesn't see her. He doesn't even think about her. I don't really like that he stopped and went: "Fluttershy?" "Nah!" as its own little bit.
You got lucky Midnight... I was about to Atomize your bucking flank...
IDK about anyone else, but I'm not sure if I should take the work "killer" literally or not.
98610
Fluttershy becoming a super saiyan... boy, wouldn't that be something?
"You are the worst bully in the entire universe! I will defeat you, and you will never be able to hurt another being ever again!!! Um, that is... if that's OK with you, I mean."