95675

That genuinely had me cracking up!

i say rape both but if i had to pick one then i would pick rarity. Let fluttershy stay innocent.

Damn!

95689

I do see what you mean. At this point, I can't really go back make a change as dramatic as that, so I'll just attribute it to him being psychotic. Even when he was introduced, he was kind of nuts. I would have liked to paced that out more, but I'm trying to keep the story short. Nonetheless, it still could have been done better, and I will take this advice to heart in the future!

this...this..THIS IS FUCKING AMAZING

95728

*Insert stoned Spike* Nah man, it's all good.

95754

Well...thanks!

I'm lovin this

If anything, I'd chose rarity. Fluttershy is too innocent for the actions included in this story

what a

Alright. Thank you guys for the nice comments! I have decided to spare Fluttershy the horrors of this story, as not to get too long or repetitive. I've got the last two chapters and the ending planned out, and will try to get most of it, if not all, done tomorrow!

both rarity and fluttershy would be a good reading.. But if one have to choose.. Rarity should be the one to get into the rape wagon next.. May i suggest another round for pinkie pie? :P...

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Yeah, the voting for Rarity was basically unanimous. Rarity's reaction would look a little something like this:

Do they not do background checks or psych evaluations for ponies? You'd think Celestia would have learned by now.

dam it man I was hoping for AJ to kick his ass

95766

Why do I enjoy the description of murder and rape... MISANTHROPY!!!

96291

I can't honestly say why I started writing this. It was a mixture of boredom and writers block. With nothing else to go on, I thought, "might as well write a clopfic!" And now here we are!

Fifth parragraph: "Winter was shocked and horrified at what Winter had done" Wut.

To me this makes sense.

95845 I see what you did there

95759

I think this is what you were looking for

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