An HIE / Anon story about an American Veteran that winds up in Equestria during a hunting trip, and what follows as he tries to acclimate to his new life. Single-Mother Derpy Focused Romance, but involves (platonically) other characters.
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I agreed with shadow being Lunas at first. Now, I'm not so sure.
Could still be Luna in the shadows, or something of a spell effect like the viewing through a magic mirror device causing it? Thestrals aren't usually portrayed as having anything close to a shadow-form unless it's a powerful magic user. Maybe he could swing by the castle and ask Tia? (Heh, that sounds way too casual)
My primary concern is the passive-aggressive attitude getting cranked up to 11, compared to what he's gotten in Ponyville. It shouldn't be a problem at the fair itself with so many visitors and likely multiple races intermingled. It's when he ventures out into the city itself...
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I'm more interested in the red text. That smacks of the Nightmare. It may be the Nightmare (ala nightmare moon) that is stalking him. Redheart didn't notice anything out of the ordinary when she followed his gaze, and the shadows are following him around without sign of any other entity. Oh, and he can't really explain why he took his rifle for a walk in the first place instead of just asking around for a job.
Just saying, the red text seems to show up to influence him, or push him in his dreams to destabilize him prior to a more positive life event, like an outing with his mare. Didn't he have nightmares prior to his first date as well?
just finished the latest chapter, and I gotta say Im hooked. There just isn't enough derpy love out there. I can honestly see the conversation happening between the two regarding Anon's ptsd from war, and Derpy's ptsd from her ex. It all feels very real and doesn't feel all that forced either. Well done sir! Here, have a spike.
This has been an absolute delight to read so far, and I am looking forward to the rest.
...I have a very bad feeling this trip will end/be interrupted by news that Twilight went snooping for his gun in his absence, and someone got hurt.
Fingers crossed this is just me being paranoid.
Man, Twilight really is acoustic.
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Kinda have to be in Equestria. What with all the random breaking into pseudo-magic songs.
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This sentence reads like two sentences fought to the death. :p
The rest is great, love Derpy
Twilight is so charmingly... Twilight
And apparently a pretty solid wingman with that encouragement. Wingoman? Wingmare?
Every time I think about Derpy's ex I would like for him to give me an excuse to put his tail on a standard in front of my house. Keep in mind that this is from a person whose Favorite song is March of Cambreth. https://youtu.be/MPZFn1-AeWI