An HIE / Anon story about an American Veteran that winds up in Equestria during a hunting trip, and what follows as he tries to acclimate to his new life. Single-Mother Derpy Focused Romance, but involves (platonically) other characters.
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She's a real one she is, that's a definitive sort of statement right there.
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Rewrote that section, lemme know if its more readable
Damn that was straight forward, even if he didn’t realize😂
I think I'm missing some of his injuries. I thought it was mainly just his lost leg. Is he missing part of his face? Normally you don't kiss someone platonically and end up having contact with their teeth. How disfigured is this guy?
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Authors note of Chapter 1 describes the general level of injury
Prosthetic Left Leg below the knee, Scars/Burns up left side of leg/torso, torn left cheek revealing teeth, like so (not my art)
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tldr; put his left foot in when it should've been out and got on a first name basis with an IED
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Ah, that's a lot more gruesome than I imagined. And yeah, I don't always read author notes. I do feel like something this important and other's reactions to his appearance should have been in the story itself. It's pretty important.
Bro really said: "Yeah, I wouldn't really mind having sex with you. Good for public image, tbh."
Anon is a menace, and I love it.
I am loving how adorable these two are!
Derpy displaying some realist common sense and motherly instinct there, she knows nopony is going to ever hurt Dinky and live to regret it.
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(suspect timing of Valentines Day next week in the narrative)
With those two now so enamored with each other I'm half expecting some bombshell to be dropped on one of them throwing everything to the wind. An almost foregone one revolves around his recent "hunting trip"; Diamond Dogs show up looking for revenge or justice as he killed unarmed DD citizens on private property... or some such legal double-talk nonsense a greasy lawyer could come up with.
Right now, I'm empathizing with both Anon and Derpy.
pulled in
After the date: "Smell ya later!"
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Gives it a whole different meaning. when a pony says it that’s flirting.
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It was in the story
🐉❤
This is true.