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Sugar Spoon: Heartbreak Helper

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Sugar Spoon helps ponies work through their heartbreak (for a reasonable fee). After receiving a request from Carrot Top she tries to get to the bottom of what has gone wrong with her relationship.

Not solving this heartbreak means the end of one of Ponyville's longest relationships and Sugar Spoon not getting her rent money.

Big thanks to EverfreePony for their amazing help with proof reading and editing.

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Khampostel

Khampostel #1 · January 19th · 2 · ·

Interesting story. The narrative is short but has several new elements for the MLP scenario.

And about the characters... Princess Candace already has competition.

eiggengrau

eiggengrau #2 · January 19th · 2 · ·

Carrot Top looked the short, pink unicorn up and down. “I thought you'd be taller.”

LOL. Kinda like "Aren't you a little short for a stormtrooper?"

Artist

Artist #3 · January 19th · 1 · ·

I like it.

hawthornbunny

hawthornbunny #4 · January 19th · 2 · ·

Cute little story and nice cliffhanger! Sugar Spoon is rather sweet :) Although I wonder if Sugar Spoon actually knew Carrot Top was tailing her. If she didn't then she rather lucked out there :)

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