The Ponyville Prowler

ShadowLDrago #1 · January 7th · · · Code Six-Nine ·

I think I know who the culprit is. Given the clues we've been given, I think there's only one pony it could be. Which, in turn, raises the question of why.

ShadowLDrago

ShadowLDrago #2 · February 16th · · · Fear and Moaning in Ponyville ·

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It was difficult to make out, the stars providing such meager illumination, but the two were still able to see what looked like the outline of a big, fat, fluffy cloud that had, presumably, just floated over their heads, completely obscuring the moon.

Confirming that the Prowler is a Pegasus, one presumably familiar with weather control, and has been keeping an eye on them for a while.

The Prowler herded the two mares to and fro through the park in this fashion, scaring them off in one direction or another, grinning and laughing all the while.

This is very much Rainbow's sense of humor.

"Well...looks like I win!" came the raspy voice.

Rainbow very much has a rasp.

The mares grunted in protest, and then in disgust as the taste of the sweaty gym socks reached their tongues.

Rainbow is an athlete.

The Prowler's victims had spoken at great length about her lithe, toned body, about her well-defined abs and her tight, muscular butt, and about her small, perky breasts. When that impressive physique had been covered by clothing, it had supposedly been adorned in a simple black sports bra, spandex shorts, and running shoes.

This is very Rainbow. To be clear, I'm not complaining, I just think it's interesting Dramatic Irony. We know who the Prowler is. They don't.

Her subtle, tomboyish features, while normally quite cute, were marred by clear weariness, with heavy bags under her half-lidded eyes and a grumpy scowl upon her lips.

The kind that might occur from several nights of mare molesting.

Twilight managed a soft chuckle, understanding Pinkie's confusion. "You'll see," she said cryptically, before proceeding to outline her plan.

Ominous! Come to think of it, while Rainbow is the obvious culprit, it COULD be a Changeling pretending to be her. But given they eat love, not fear, and don't appear to work alone, that doesn't fit their modus operandi.

HeroicNonsense

HeroicNonsense #3 · February 16th · · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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I hope the cat is ok.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #4 · February 16th · 1 · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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It was a temporary spell. He got better.

Bryan Luna

Bryan Luna #5 · February 17th · · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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Those traits are also had by Spitfire, so she isn't necessarily ruled out.

That said, I'll have to read it to know to more.

ShadowLDrago

ShadowLDrago #6 · February 19th · · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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it had been Rainbow Dash who had come to Twilight's aid, passionately commending her bravery for taking on such a dangerous mission, and saying that any one of them would have done the same if it meant protecting the mares of Ponyville.

Uh huh. I bet.

"I saw right through your little disguise, of course, but when I saw you all dressed up like some slutty streetwalker, I just couldn't resist! It was a good plan, but...it probably needed a little more work."

Helps trhat you knew the plan ahead of time.

After a few more moments and a few more playful gropes, the two reached the cloud, then dove straight on into it. Twilight felt the touch of cool mist upon her face as they plunged into that fluffy mass, a feeling that would probably have been soothing, had she been in the correct mental state to appreciate it.

Good, she's not dumb enough to bring her back home.

Sky blue coat and a rainbow mane? Why does that sound so familiar?

Because there's a very short list of ponies with that color combo.

I just couldn't help myself. I knew I had to do that again!"

It's very on brand for Rainbow to not think this through as much as she probably should.

HeroicNonsense

HeroicNonsense #7 · February 19th · · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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On a serious note, this has been a delightful read. I can foresee 1 likely ending; This is an elaborate kinky game and the entire town is in on it. After the Prowler is somehow dealt with, another one takes her place. Possibly using ropes and Earth Pony strength.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #8 · February 20th · · · The Hunter Becomes the Hunted ·

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I can neither confirm nor deny that speculation, but I'm glad to hear you've enjoyed my story so far.

Fox Boss

Fox Boss #9 · February 23rd · · · Peace in Our Time ·

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I hope you continue this and have the rest of the Mane 6 get 'attacked'.

Starswirl the Beardless

Starswirl the Beardless #10 · February 24th · · · Peace in Our Time ·

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That idea is appealing, I'll admit, but I currently have no plans to continue this story. Sorry to disappoint.

Fox Boss

Fox Boss #11 · February 24th · 1 · · Peace in Our Time ·

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That's a shame, I had some ideas for how they break the Mane 6 and give them certain kinks, along with some others.
AJ: Shibari, mainly with her own lasso, tied in a manner where it grinds her erogenous zones whenever she moves.
Fluttershy: Animal Cosplay, with items such as buttplug-tails, a bitchsuit, collars, etc.
Rarity: Sexy/Slutty Costumes, ones that, ironically, she herself made through an anonymous customer.
Pinkie: Restraints, such as harnesses, handcuffs, vacbeds/vacsacks, etc.

Meanwhile, Twilight helps her in a disguise, that being a latex catsuit with a specially designed gimp mask that allows her to see, but hides her eyes, such as pinholes or close-range sheer fabric.

Thoughts?

Starswirl the Beardless