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Man's determination is endless.
What does earth pony Alexei look like? what's his mane, fur colors and his eyes.
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Everything will be described in detail in the next chapter
There are reasons for this.
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Ah I see I'm getting ahead of myself here maybe I'm just exited.
Are you sure twilight sparkle can be corrupted so easily? I would like if you could express her thoughts and your more deeply because besides admiration for Alexie determination and his fear of death I don't think she should feel sympathetic or empathetic to his cause.
Also can you write the link of the video you posted? I can't open it
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What makes you think she's corrupted? She still despises the methods of a man.
She has no sympathy for his cause.
She's going to go her own way, not copy him. Whether she can save her friends and keep her self is another question.
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I re read the chapter a couple of times and i was able to paint a new picture. You gave all the mlp characters a more broader personality that add a touch of "grey" to the usual colourful world of mlp. Celestia, luna, Twilight and other have a touch of selfishness with them. It's still a good story although now I don't know what to expect anymore from the likes of Twilight Sparkle supposed paragon of Harmony, Celestia the wise benevolent ruler ( readings her cold thoughts and demeanour towards someone she dislike was scary) and luna.
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>What make me think she is corrupted?
It's not that I think it, it's just that I read so many fictions that I can recognise what could look like a narrative turning point. Of course in your story she could be corrupted or maybe not, I don't know what are you planning for her but I do believe you wanted her to lear something from it.
To answer you question in another way: it's because she admired alexei determination despite his misguided nature.
In my view (not aligned with this story) OG Twilight would never think of admiring the monster that alexei had become.
This Twilight did, you made her question things and herself
Great chapter! He pulled a dumb and dumber on them!😂
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Is Discord planning to team up/use him? The Draconequus should know at this point Alexei is NOT a trustworthy ally (albeit to be honest, he only killed those partners who were trying to kill him in turn).
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It is. I'm not familiar with the canon at all.
Well, yes, I know the main points and some major things, but that's it.
So yeah - it's definitely not the colorful world from the show. I'm trying to take what I think are the main things about the character and then pour realism into it. Of course they're going to have selfishness.
As for Celestia... I think a lot of people forget that she's a few thousand years old and what that means for personality.
Yes, she is generally kind and really cares about her ponies.
BUT. She is a few thousand years old. She has experienced so much suffering and pain that her emotions have long since been dulled and there is little that can affect her. She may well have tea with the foals in the morning, and a bloody massacre of griffins at lunchtime, if that's what the country needs.
Rather, Twilight admires the very determination, perseverance, and fortitude. She tries to separate these traits from the personality to which it is attached, but it is difficult. Therefore, she is ashamed of these thoughts.
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Maybe... who knows
Alexei: crazy? I was crazy once, they locked me in a cell, a gray cell, a gray cell with rats, rats make me crazy, crazy? I was crazy once...
So he escaped and turned into a pony ? Hmm I hope it isn't permanent but I'm still interested to see where this is heading. Def can see his journey to insanity and power and I wonder if he'll clap another Cillian like Sombrero to steel his power perhaps ?
😧