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Lady Umbra


I love writing both Original Fanfictions and Movie Adaptations, I also love all forms of feedback

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It's the jolly season, not the spooky season!

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True but I have a bit of a kink for vampire's

Smart i do enjoy reading the story as i'm guessing over time Twilight will start feeling love towards Fluttershy and once that happens Twilight will be at Fluttershy's mercy and will end doing everything she is told just to make sure Fluttershy will be happy

there’s a typo when you’re describing Twilight.
pale violet connection should be complexion

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Thank you for pointing that out.

This is getting good, I love it when a vampire imprints on an enemy

I REALLY hope all 3 can survive i don't want to see a broken hearted Fluttershy because only one foal survives. This story is dark enough let''s NOT introduce Fluttershy to still-birth. My heart can't take it!!!

On a side note I would love to see Twilight's wedding gift be the sexy bunny outfit mentioned in this chapter and actually see Fluttershy wear it but get aroused by wearing it for her mistress and basically have sex with Twilight while wearing it. Heck have the sexy bunny outfit modified so it it able to be worn during sex and everytime Twilight calls her "sexy bunny" or "future bunny momma" or "my sexy breeding bunny" or something else along those lines it drives up Fluttershy's sexual arousal even more

"I'm simply one hell of a butler" great line.

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FINALLY!!!
You have not idea how long I've been waiting for someone to comment on that particular line. I have also been waiting to use that line since I introduced Spike as the butler

"N-no... I haven't," Twilight whispered, her anger and fear melting away as she realized the truth in Fluttershy's words. "I've only taken what I need to survive."

Didn't she kill a thrall just earlier?

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Technically they die the moment they become a thrall. At best they are walking corpses

This is a delightful AU Story. I eagerly await more.:twilightsmile:

Are there going to be any vampire lolis in this story?

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Maybe.. maybe not... You'll have to wait and see

So happy when i saw a new chapter, nice chapter.

Loving this series and loved seeing this come out.

Nice Addam's Family reference

"You raaang," the Thrall said in a deep voice.

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Thank you. I was hoping someone spotted it.

Nice chapter, sound like a fight will happen soon.

I won't ask. But i hope near the end Aurora learns her true identity, embraces her true life and name and self. Then helps dethrone and hopefully depower and judge Celestia for her crimes and gets the severest punishment Twilight can give. Hell maybe Twilight should turn Celestia into what she hates most! That being she gets turned into a vampire herself and being forced to be a slave to Twilight!!!

Love how this story is developing. Great chapter.

Very nice chapter, i wonder if Spike will breakout soon?

Celestia's becoming more unhinged, i hope she falls and spike is safe.

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I would like to know for sure before I read this story. I’ll still read it either way, just know that I’m going to enjoy a LOT more if there are vampire lolis in it (especially if they’re evil ones).

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Honestly I don't know. Maybe towards the end but it's honestly up in the air

Ty for the lasts chapter it was wonderful. I am very honored to be able to ready a very well written story my congratulations I look ever forward to ready more

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"N-no... I haven't," Twilight whispered, her anger and fear melting away as she realized the truth in Fluttershy's words. "I've only taken what I need to survive."

But... whether they die when she makes them a thrall, or kills them when she drains the thrall dry. Either Twilight is a spectacular actor and is deceiving even the reader when she 'realized the truth in Fluttershy's words', or Twilight is deluding herself quite skillfully.

"They won't even bother to know the Twilight I love and you serve. They won't even take a minute to sit down and talk. All they'd want to do is find a wooden stick and jam it through her precious heart."

Playing catchup, so maybe it gets brought up later, but isn't Fluttershy only what she is because at some point in her family history, a vampire and a pony had a baby? I suppose it might not have been consensual or willing, but if Fluttershy is an indication then someone did the same thing as her.

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