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Sunset Reed
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Sunset Reed
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Honestly, I like these goofy one-shot concept stories.
But if you want people to read it (Myself included) you'll have to fix the wall of text
Try using a new line for each peace of dialogue as well as each new paragraph.
I won't give a thumbs up or down till I've actually had a proper chance to read through it.
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Wall of text, got it! Thanks!
Loved it! Space it out a bit more, though.
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Done! Thanks for reading :)
1387901 Awesome. I loved the ending, it was great!
oh christ i laughed hard
Very good, it's nice to see other authors taking advice and using it.
I can see this easily reaching the featured boxs, it's unique, well written, and quite funny.
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Wow, Thanks so much! That means a lot!
I'm really trying to use this story as a grounds to improve. I hadn't known of the "wall of text" issue before, so I was glad to fix it.
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Yeah, I should have been more specific when I said that.
I usually assume "Wall of Text" is something most authors should know about, though it seems to be the down fall many new stories.
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I assumed it was just a comicking issue.
It's not even a lava lamp! I'll give you 5 bits.
This was quite good- I am surprised it didn't get many likes. I suspect your formatting error earlier drove a lot of your prospective audience away, which is a shame, because this ticks all the boxes for me- short, funny and well written. I was laughing every few hundred words or so.
And now it is about to fall of the front page, never to be seen again. Le sigh.
The resolution is priceless AND well set up!
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Thank you!
Thorax caught the error pretty quickly, and I likewise edited it pretty quickly. Those first few moments are crucial, though.
People seem to like it so I'll send it to a couple groups. I'm also attempting to have it proofread so as to send it to EQD. We'll see how that goes.
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Its a pleasure. And good luck!
A fav and an up-vote for a screwball farce comedy that actually works. Well timed, well written and with the funniest shout out to Loony Toons ever.
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Thanks so much! I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Edit- I just looked up "screwball farce comedy" and while I can't say that was my intention, I can say I understand how you see it portrayed here and will pretend I wrote it that way all along.
But you didn't hear that from me.
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Thanks for your complements, and for being honest about the errors. I'm having it read over at SALT and so far the edits have been fantastic.
And yes, I think Bon Bon got the happiest ending out of all of them.
The one thing I loved about this story was the Bugs Bunny reference XD
