What others view as childish are Tania's beliefs, and what she views as childish is what will save her. She has to protect her world even while she discovers more about what's beyond it, but she has to swallow her pride so she doesn't have to do it alone. All the while, the sun is setting and the magic is slipping away. A human take on a popular story.
I like it. I can't wait for more
Have a mustache.
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I accept your mustache, and wear it proudly. Thanks for the comment!
YEAH!!!!! dude thank you for the longest time I've been trying to find a humanized version of the mare in the moon, THIS IS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yup, I will take full credit for reading your mind and preparing this story for your reading pleasure.
But seriously, I am quite pleased over this coincidence.
Take my thumbs up and fav! Good job!
I was hooked from '...taking their toll on the young University student. She was wearing the same shirt for the third day that week, her eyes were bloodshot and her straight black hair had lost its shine. It had been a while since she had clipped in her signature purple and pink extensions.'
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Oh good. I'm always nervous around descriptions in case I'm spoon-feeding the reader. Apparantly I did OK
406929 It's because it's so realistic, close to real life~ I'm a student as well, I know!
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(So am I) I wouldn't know, I'm actually a solemn professional who totally didn't sleep until almost noon yesterday.
Didn't notice that it had updated. I think human Spike acts better for one with a crush.
'a nearby mailwoman'? That totally had me laughing
I would love to see every episode of MLP: FiM done like this!
Glad you both are enjoying it!
Boy, I wish I could do the whole series. I'd love to puzzle out how to humanize the entire Equestrian world.
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Challenge Given... Humanize the whole series...
Is the Challenge Accepted?
I love how you actually put misspellings in the text from 'kyle' since he IS eleven
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If it will appease the audience, I might do a few other stories after this one (might). I try not to think too far though, It starts to feel like work. It's pretty awesome that you guys would invest enough interest in it for the suggestion, though.
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Even if only a few, I can see it as a great success!
Also, on a side not here, whoring myself out. If you don't mind reading HiE stories, I have a story I'd like commenting on, as it is my first bit of creative writing. It's called Abandoned Hopes, and it is on its second series. Thanks to any who read it.
Mmmm.. Now i want apple flavored hot sauce.....
wut
um call me ignorant but whats a Freedian?
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This is a great question. Stay tuned for the answer!
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You are doing a wonderful job of transcribing the Show into human motions. I was honestly a little concerned about how you would handle the cliff fall/save, but you did it brilliantly. A moustache for you sir.
And another handful to encourage you to finish.
I do hope you continue on, and do other episodes as well.
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Thanks, I needed the encouragement.
Also the mustaches. You wouldn't believe how frayed these things get after you wear them all day.
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You're welcome. You really are an amazing writer.
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D'aw shucks. :)
What's a Freedian?
Are you going to finish this story? I really want to see more.
Nightmare Moon