“Relax, kid. No one can hear or seem me except you. So try not to talk so loud otherwise you'll just look like you're talking to yourself.” Drakon suggested.

It’s “see” me.

Random Old Lady: “You keep talking to yourself and people will think you’re crazy.”

Next up, Everfree Academy.

Liking this so far.

Hell yeah. This is amazing already~

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Random Old Lady: “You keep talking to yourself and people will think you’re crazy.”

Spike: "Thanks, l will keep that in mind"

Random Old Lady: "I wasn't talking to you"

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Too late man It's happening. If you don't like it there's the door. 👉🚪Just don't let it hit you on the way out.

Nice that Spike is transferring to another school that shows him a little more respect. That said however, I'm a little disappointed that Spike didn't get even with Shadow and his two sluts, but it does make him come off as the better man. Though, I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of those three.

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Was that a cars reference? You have me impressed.

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it was indeed... though l pictured the random old lady as Granny Smith for some reason.

Well, I think this story is off to a good start. I'll bookmark this story because I feel like Spike sometimes doesn't get the respect he deserves for what he did in the show and how he born. Sometimes with living parents, sometimes they somehow die shortly after he is born. Either way, I can't wait for more of this story.

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You say that like it's a good thing. At some point, authors recognize that hypersexualising on first contact is a bad idea.

It's done with purpose or with humor, blatant is bland.

Same with a main character creepily observing every single minute detail of another character's appearance within seconds of meeting them. It's creepy and breaks flow. (luckily, it seems he grew out if this one since the last story I read from bro)

Both of these practises are something authors grow out of. I'm just trying to push him there a little faster.

Edit 1: For Mech

My comment is aimed at author so he can grow at a faster rate than I did. My comments was not for you

If you find it discouraging, then that's your own fault.

If you enjoy the story so much, and are aware of its peeves, then you should not be perturbed when someone merely points them out.

It means that you are, in fact, peeved by those parts of the story.

At least be honest about what you feel, to yourself, if not to me.

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So? Stuff like that is common in these kinds of stories.

As I said, if you don’t like it then you shouldn’t be here. Especially if you’re gonna bitch and moan about it. No one likes a party pooper after all.

Well… call me intrigued. I’m in. But even so, try to remember that you decided to mix in some Batman parts. So do your best to mix that in with the story that you have here. We’re all here for you, Wildcard25!

Why hasn’t this guy write anything by good in anthro. Again with the dragon spirit guide? I’m guessing there would be no isekai door here.

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I still think Spike should teach those three a lesson to not bother him ever again, considering how Shadow is a total moron to not take no for an answer.