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Thanks for the update!
Overall decent start so far, I'd point out the few spelling and grammatical mistakes I saw, but it's a huge pain in the ass on a mobile device.
I'm glad you didn't make him instantly OP, despite being very strong.
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Tell me about it, I've been having so much damn trouble trying to correct any mistakes I come across at work but it just does not work
And yea, while this is a bit of a power fantasy for me, I didn't want to make him to be super powerful out of the gate as I thought that would be cheap, uninteresting and wouldn't allow for growth (both character and power wise)
Glad you're enjoying it so far
Ok I'm seeing a lot on game reference/crossover. Still can't place the sword the closest is the rune sword welded by War. What I'm really confused of right now ignore the literal ghost is the fact it sounds like are protagonist just fought the god of prophecy baldur of all bloody thing!
And if it is I don't think he's quite dead yet
Well, you said to point out any mistakes and I just realized that our main character has been getting hungry and eating as if he needs food. If I remember correctly, back when he first started out in the everfree forest, he said that he didn't actually need food. Did something change? Do I need to read more to find out why or how? Just food for thought I guess.
I really wish he stayed out from under the boot heel of the Princesses and remained solo, but it is what it is I guess...