The bug queen has broken into Anon's house, he dose not like this and immediately starts boxing the house fly that now resides in his house. (spoiler the swiss cheese pony gets her ass beat)
(bad photo shop I know 
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milk rain
The hell diver arc is done. The milk pictures are back.
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Why not
The concept is Funny but I feel like the execution of it could be better
11680132
thanks for the feedback I am still kind of new to writing fanfic but rn just doing these fics for fun
Decent smack talk from Anon, but I'm disappointed by the absence of 'Horsefly'.
The pipe was gold.
A this point I knew this was gonna be good.
And I was right and now I have a new threat to my catalog.
I need more stories of humans proving to everypony that their fists are rated E for everyone.
11680371
glad you liked it :)
11680132
the execution made it even funnier
Bugbitch dun FA, FO
YES!!! I need more of this. Villains just getting their fade ran. No elements. No rainbow lasers. No magic of friendship. Just nothing but hands.
Please make a sequel to this with many chapters!
11680472
idk I might in the future but as of right now I think its best as a solo story
Stilted lines imo
Gud Shit tho-
MASSIVE skill issue
I love how much of this is written in the future tense, like it's a prophecy
Good story but PLEASE get yourself an editor.
11681039
Where would I find one?
11681040
Ask around this site.
11681040
Grammerly can help out a lot on cutting down on misspelling and grammar mistakes.
11681318
yeah I just used it and updated the story like 30 mins or an hour ago.
It's really funny, but it needs work. You forgot a lot of periods
In fairness, Anon has a point. If he could beat up bug butt in fisticuffs, then there's no excuse to Celestia losing to Chrysalis in a magic battle.
Celestia confirmed to be weakest princess.
11681641
Not weakest, necessarily. Just worst.
Now we need Celestia and Anon duking it out !
11681641
Wasn’t she boosted by love of something like that when she beat her?
11681940
I need anon and sunset shimmer duking it out. Human on Human violence.
A good story, just need to fix some grammar
Get Rekt Scrub
Holy Shit that Thumbnail is Fucking Glorious
11682755
Not really its just a basic photo shop lol. All i did was crop out bug queens face and put it over the intruders face and then i just changed the color of the hands from grey to green. Hell you can still see some grey in the green hands.
11682999
still though your choice to photoshop THAT meme specifically using THAT expression was godsent
and also random thought I had at the creation of that photoshop "Holy shit I'm gonna cum."
I agree Ckelestia has a Skill Issue
11683014
well thanks :)
11680371
Imagine that being the entire plot of a story. Just an entire compilation of multiple characters catching hands.
11685881
Love it.
Ha.
Bro, this shit is actually hilarious in an unironic way. It feels like it was written while blackout drunk in the best possible way, and the lack of proper grammar adds so much to it instead of detracting from it. This is comedy gold, 100%. Easy Golden Story.
This is good, always be good at hand to hand combat
can i see a sequel where Celestia challenges him and get beat badly to prove his point? if not that is ok
So the burning question: was this actually written while sober?
11843352
Quiet a few people asked this in the comments, but I am not old enough to drink yet. (Sorry to burst some of yalls bubbles), but i did write this off of a single hour of sleep so that could have been factor. You could say.
11843470
Whew. One hour of sleep will do that to ya. That actually makes a lot of sense.
What does it mean to “runs the 1s” with someone?
11879585
Its just slang. Running the ones can mean mutiple things in different contexts