Twilight Sparkle comes to be with Pinkamena in front of her. Just those two in a home and Pinkamena wants Twilight to stay around, forever, or else. What is Twilight to do in this situation? Why is Pinkie acting like this? And can Twilight escape with her life?
Holy fiery nipples of Celestia, what the hell just happened O_o
What is wrong with Pinkie? Wait...is that Pinkie Pie? Or some evil clone, I have so many questions...
It's "didn't you... kill me?"
It might be "oki doki" because "okai" should probably be pronounced "oh-ka-i" or smth.
I still have many questions which may be answered in the next chapter, I'll keep reading.
What? Feel like rapping? I don't...HuHh? And then she just kills her?! What... I can just imagine Pinkie Pie grabbing a microphone and then rapping on Twi's dead body.
Jokes aside though, I'm intrigued, I really am, but I won't leave a Derpy, you can have a Pinkamena though to match your story!
Spice!!!:
Aaahhhhh, that was confusing, the last moments of the chapter, such as after Twi finds the real Pinkie, feel a bit rushed, like, at first reading, everything went over my head, I had to read it twice.