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kaiblade151


Been awhile huh.

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What is the plot of this story?

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So far it's going to be set before Grogar and have Alex come into contact with events before mlpg4

He will then help to set things up in advance for the ponies to welcome more humans later on.

This story is mainly about the fight with grogar and how he'd be defeated without Celestia and Luna being there.

Also thank you for commenting it means alot to an old polk like me.

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Tldr: I'm using this story as a spring board for a later one.

And trying to not include too many tropes while still making it fun to read.

The monsters will be almost completly diffrent minus a few handful, and Alex will have to work together with the ponys to beat gogar.

he's not getting any "gifts" outside of his friends and whatever they bring to the table as the beings that they are.

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He's going to stay a normal human including whatever knowlage he had before which is things most people can learn quickly like

how to treat a wound without proper first aid, what to do if your lost, how to hunt, basic strategy, mlpg4 and g5 and monster knowlage etc you get the idea.

it's all going to be basic stuff you can learn in school, youtube or by looking it up.

Outside of making a potatoe gun which is something you can do but is hard to do, but that's something I personally want to add

https://youtu.be/ykF3TUTI2hU

Here's the potato gun video. It's called a potato launcher I made one as a kid with my father I want him to make one too as a kid with his brother.

Also I'm currently writing my next chapter as we speak but it's going to be a bit.

Good start but the grammar need a little work otter Then that pretty good so far keep at it you wil get there :)

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Thank you!

I'm working on the next chapter I'm about 1/3rd the way though.

I'm also trying to make it a longer one this time.

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Also I wanted to give you all a heads up

There will be 8 ponies, 3 humans, and 3 other species in this that will be helping long term.

Each one of them will bring something to the table for Alex it will be bonds or his ability to help people when they need him, he's not good at much else but he's great at they, for Shattered canyon they bring "strength" whether it's pure strength or strength of character they have it.

Also I'm using they because Alex doesn't know there gender yet and I plan on doing a poll soon.

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Poll is up on blog vote for what gender you what.

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Deadline is end of next week when I finish the next part.

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