im not very likable but i hope my stories are lol
She's crazy. When talking through text, that's all Sunset can think about. Actually, Sunsets. Make that two of them.
Written experimentally for the A Thousand Words Contest II, which has many amazing entries!
Also the title is supposed to be like International Connection but pun yk??
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Hahaha, so one Sunset fell into Equestria via a well Little Jimmy Style, while the other is just enjoying this for all its worth.
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A very normal, friendly conversation
Very nice. It absolutely reads like an excerpt of a longer conversation between two characters who already know each other, which is not easy to do. Also:
lol. lmao even
hehe that did sound quite Trixie-ish
hey it’s her mane that is bacon colored, not her!
so true the curse of smartphones do NOT belong in Equestria!
hehe that means something different from where Sunset (the horse) is from! and i thought “sess” was going to be a cool misspelling of “sis” at first, but it originating from “princess” is a cool idea!
i see that Sunset (the horse) has taken to internet IM speak very well. thank you for writing!
I hate starring down the wrong end of a generation gap. I blame my English teacher of a mother; I can feel her leering over my shoulder if I don’t properly punctuate my texts…
In any case, an entertaining epistolary story. I do have to wonder how the Sunset in Equestria has cell service in a world where telephones were only ever seen in background (well, foreground) gags, but the answer there is probably “magic.”
I’m honestly more interested in how the Sunsets met and exchanged contact information in the first place, but that is outside the scope of the story. As is, entertaining concept, but you didn’t do terribly much with it. I like the idea of pony Sunset being so inured to exploring other worlds that she doesn’t understand her counterparts panic, especially in her native world, but beyond that there’s just not much here. Still, thank you for it.