Sunset finds her way into Canterlot City, after having escaped from the Alicorn of the Sun herself. A truth that couldn't be changed. A spark far too volatile for even the immortal Princess of Equestria herself. Now one that has been released upon the Earth.
Sunset's goal? Conquest.
Her current task, however? Learning how these Humans walk on these so-called feet of theirs.
A task made all the more difficult by the general lunacy that afflicts most humans. Thankfully one that is a magician in training has made its way to her by its own initiative.
Chapters (1)
Ha! I knew it!
I have mixed feelings about this story. I think the premise is good, if not that original. You had some cute moments between Sunset and Trixie as well. My biggest issue is that the characters feel a bit out-of-character in terms of their dialogue and the narration. Sunset speaks much too formally, even considering her background, and this makes the prose feel a bit awkward. Adding to the awkwardness is the mechanical issues throughout. I think this could have been much better if you had done a bit more proofreading to help you iron out the kinks.