Velvet has writer's block. She finds this tiring.
Written for the A Thousand Words Contest II
Chapters (1)
- Member Since 5th May, 2020
- offline last seen 20 hours ago
Kit Wolfkat
See historical references on my stories, and also amateur writing.. Kofi!
Kit Wolfkat
Joined 5th May, 2020 ·
Offline
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.113 seconds
Total duration
1,025 users online
2,512,456 hits today, 2,454,720 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
nice story kit :D
11599031
Thank you!
D'aaaw
AI Review: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/217075/ai-reviews/thread/520813/writers-block
aww, wonder what happened in between these two eternities of mundanity
aww that is so Twilight! adorable
ooh, wonder what she means by this
hehe this does read like a mom writing it somehow
love that there are ice cream carts in Equestria instead of trucks
that filly sure does love reading!
and this is indeed the solution to writer’s block: wait until something comes up to give you an excuse to not write, which won’t take very long with children in the house. thanks for writing!
With that title, are you sure this wasn’t meant for the Horror category?
Hmm. I get the sense that this is one of those “I can’t think of anything, so I’ll write about a character who can’t think of anything” stories. There are some sweet moments, but overall it just feels aimless. You really don’t have the real estate needed to meander like this in a thousand-word story; nothing can get the time and detail it needs to feel fully explored, even in the context of a wandering mind looking for inspiration and/or distraction. (Also, please pick a verb tense and stick with it.)
In all, this really struggled to accommodate the word limit. Still, thank you for the entry. There are a number of ideas here with great potential should you choose to expand on them.
11699154
Thanks for the comment! I'll take your advice into my later ones. Really, I didn't expect to be good since this is my first writing competition so I much more or less expecting a lot of criticisms.
Right now, I'll mprove what I know and can first. Thanks for the comment mate!