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CuTiE_PoNY-JacKie


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Не ожидал, что кто-то из КФ попробует опубликовать здесь.

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Не первое произведение из РФ, здесь опубликованное.

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Я знаю за Сломанную игрушку от товарища DarkKnight, остальные нет.

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Есть ещё "Лишняя" от WerWolf_54
по очевидным причинам, я за переводами русских произведений тоже не особо слежу

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Хмм, у меня такое ощущение, что я где-то уже видел. То ли на понификшен, то ли на фикбук. Не могу вспомнить.

That's good, and that's great that you're bringing art to a wider audience.:trixieshiftleft:

Eldorado
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NSFW links aren't permitted anywhere on Fimfic; that includes your cover art "source" link. If the source is NSFW, you can tell people the artist or otherwise direct people to find it, but you can't link it.

I've removed it for you already. Just FYI for the future. "No NSFW links" means "no NSFW links," no exceptions.

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Excuse me. I just wanted readers to be able to see the link to the original from the author. But since this kind of content is wrong, I won't do it again. Sorry.

Eldorado
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No big deal. Just tell people the artist or derpi ID number or something in the description. You just can't have a full, clickable link.

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Well. That is certainly a different way to get revenge.

In ancient Greece it was popular to have a small penis because they were considered sophisticated, whereas large penises were considered barbaric and animalistic. This was reflected in the sculptures they made, and there was a story about a man making a sculpture of another man with an enormous penis as a giant "Fuck You" to that guy.

It's good to see that history repeats itself.

for those that are looking...
derpibooru -> 2456284 (start here... it has links to the next 3 images)

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It is not quite correct. The person himself was perceived as so great that he did not need a big penis. And yes right, a big penis was perceived as an animalistic quality and a low quality of personality...something like that. Have you seen the sculptures themselves? He is handsomely built, with the right amount of muscle strength, He is great in his own right. The perfection of man. So it turns out that by adding a penis to Twilight, Trixie questioned her moral and mental qualities.

Now that Trixie's revenge has been flawlessly executed, I'm looking forward to see how it's gonna backfire on her. :twilightblush:

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It was also edited in comic version (by the author of this very fic, I believe). Post number is 2765965.

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the words make it even better. lol

well that's a vile horrible thing, nopony should wake up with a dick they don't want.

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Wouldn't be much of a revenge if that was a dick she did want, now would it?

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Don't worry, it's a comedy story, Twilight will be fine ))))

lol this story has potential
Just imagining Trixie as a lewd Banksy with her pet cockatrice going around and tagging everyone with lewd alterations

nice work on both chapters:twilightsmile:

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Don't worry. I expect Twilight is going to give it back. At length and in depth.

A little light on he rgre aspect, but interesting idea and I'm wondering how nsfw it'll go... And with who

looks like Spike's gonna have to teach her the methods to stealth wanking... or at least proper aiming and cleanup

So Twilight couldn't figure out how to pee and/or was too afraid of her dick that she held a full bladder for hours and had to ask Spike to explain it all to her before she wet the carpet. But then she just rubbed out a good nut without hesitation? What a silly sausage.

Interestingly enough, forgetting how to pee is an actual thing that happens. It's mostly caused by stress and caffeine.

/trivia

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Actually, the point of the joke was that Twilight hoped until the last moment that Celestia would teleport to her, and she wouldn't have to deal with the whole thing herself. But that didn't happen, so she just let it go.

Well, she started to masturbate on the automatic, feeling the call of nature, which she decided not to oppose ))))

You know what suddenly occurred to me?

Where, when and why did Trixie learn to sculpt such magnificent penises? Is this a thing she does regularly?

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I hinted at it in the first chapter:
After passing several shelves of clay figurines she'd made herself (a little hobby Trixie was into besides magic tricks), the mare sat down on the wide couch and unwrapped a fresh newspaper.

"Yeah, I'd feel a lot better if I could get back at her somehow and expose her to ridicule. But how?" The unicorn reasoned, looking at the figures of handsome stallions with enormous dicks, on which she had worked particularly hard.

Eeyup. That's about what I expected.

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Rarity acting like some whore feels really weird. Rarity is many things but doing sexual assault on her own friend that’s a bit much.

Well... that kinda ruined the mood. I was all on board with all this lighthearted comedy right up until the sexual assault that rolled right into emotional manipulation. Rarity is a terrible friend and I hope her actions have consequences and aren't just brushed aside in the afterglow.

"Aah! Why do I have a dick?!" Twilight cried out in a frightened voice, stomping on the spot and banging everything with her new cock.

People... people are creative

"Oh, dear. You've got it all wrong. The sire stallion isn't a whore at all. He's a kind of doctor who relieves the misery and problems of lonely mares. And the fact that he enjoys it himself doesn't make him a whore."

No, Twilight's right. A sire stallion is a whore. Enjoyment doesn't nullify whoriness.

The encounter with Cheerilee just killed me! The acwkard interaction and the expected result... Like they say, I expected it but I surprised anyway. Amazing, keep going.

"Twilight?!" The ruler of Equestria suddenly exclaimed loudly. The bump under the blanket immediately stopped shaking, and two heads peeked out, one of which belonged to her best student and the other... her little sister!

Yay, TwiLuna cameo!

And after a little more time on the roof, she turned and, with Spike, headed inside the clinic where her lovely wife, the Great and Powerful Trixie, worked.

Twixie ending, not bad.

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Aha, so that's what this shipping is called. Thanks for the tip, and I'm glad you liked the story :scootangel:

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