Non Uberis
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...Oh, that was pretty hot. I've always had a certain weakness for Chrysalis' being turned into an (incredibly) curvy bimbo. Good writing.
nice
Are, you OK?
There's an existential horror here, tied in and enhancing the sex. That doesn't seem at all unusual for you, and I'm the last person to judge, given how much I enjoy it as well.
But this still feels slightly off. The moral deliberation doesn't feel like teasing and encouraging cognitive dissonance, it feels poignant and longing, something where our smutty heroes are not succeeding in any regard.
I still like it. Do what you have to, to be happy.
Also, tits. Tits are pretty good.
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It's a good trope, the kind I don't really get to see very often because I have extraordinarily niche proclivities when it comes to smut. <3>
Thank!
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I'm fine, thanks for asking. I just have issues when it comes to people and I realized that I might have been channeling some of that existential frustration.
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Well...yeah, pretty much, that dissonance is a large part of the point. Perhaps I could have done this plot without Luna, just had Chrysalis stewing over her annoyance with ponies and sex and finally throwing herself over the deep end, or I could have leaned harder into the notion of wish fulfillment and had both of them just really want this. For better or worse I unavoidably gravitate toward emotional drama; Chrysalis is a character who strikes me as wholly unrepentant and unwilling to go along with the changes in her world, but I also feel that that would come with a great deal of self-loathing as she comes to realize that there is no place for her and her poisonous personality is entirely self-defeating. Luna also falling into a similar issue with her trauma and emotional baggage was sort of a happy accident, unintended when I originally decided to include her; it had at one point been suggested to me that she'd want to bimbofy herself too because it was a secret fantasy of hers, but I guess I didn't like the idea of her gleefully giving herself over to this while Chrysalis was going through more emotional turmoil.
I prefer bimbofication in the sense of "living a simple life" rather than specifically "brainless and sex-obsessed" and I'm not really wild about personality death being played off in a fetish context, so in stories like these it's always about examining the nature of the situation and determining whether it's worthwhile for the characters to accept this instead of actually addressing their problems. A sequel, perhaps, would detail them being brought down from this high and having to confront their actual problems and decide whether or not they want to continue an existence like this. Or, you know, Celestia or some other characters giving over to the bimbofication too, whatever works.
Anyhow, thanks though, glad you enjoyed it regardless!