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TryingToActProfessional
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What cover art?
Before reading the longer description, I was thinking, "We're going to see some snuff... excellent."
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You're really rushing out with the dialogue, that's not good.
are you plan to make her fatter?
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Yes. Yes I will. Just for you. :)
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You'll have to crop the Luna Pic. FIMFiction policy on tiddies, Moon sized or otherwise, are Nope'd
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Thank you for the warning. Problem fixed. Link to the pic should still work, tho.
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I love the memes, bro. Thanks for the read!
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Got it now. Didn't upload before.
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I thank you for the criticism and will try to fix in later chapters. I was going for realistic dialogue where talking is fast paced and sone after another.
I was wondering since he pulled the Apple out of the screen it made it not age does that mean since he went in and did machine make him on unable to age as well
I like this story. Didnt like the rape part, but its what you decided to do. Not gonna stop ya. Cant wait for more.
Your math he is three-year-old By their calendar
Chrysalis is going to die by luna right
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Yes. He is incapable of aging in their world.
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Glad you enjoyed!
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True, true. But if they use their age system for him, he's as old as Twilight, the supposed eldest of the Elements. And I abide by that logic.
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We shall see. Never know...
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If Luna doesn't kill her she will still beat her to an inch of her life.
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Possibly. But I'll never tell. You'll just have to read it to find out!
what gonna happen in the next one? battle in three way.
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You'll just have to wait and see!
Well x-rays won't really help you there.
You'll want CAT scans to see organs.
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It was a little joke.
I do like this story but please, PLEASE separate your paragraphs when different characters are speaking. Other than that not much to say. Bravo
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I second that
This is getting very interesting!!!
BTW could you give him a Diamond Dog love interest? Just wondering!!
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We'll see
9372914
Will do.
I only need for the hyper-pregnancy mentioned in the description to NOT be exclusive to Chrysalis.
I really think it would be wiser to return his core, rather than have the 'professionals' that work for Celestia do anything with it.
what else cross will have next?
Love this!!
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No worries, not just Chrissi!
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Patience, Iago. Patience.
will cross fuck twilight next?
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We'll see
So he basically functions similar to the commanders from the Supreme Commander RTS game series; I wonder if he's limited to creating things he only has full understandings of their inner workings, if so no super futuristic technology.
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We shall see. But yeah, pretty much
what gonna happen next after hangover?
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Read and find out in the next chapter. Maybe
Love the new cover art 10/10
P.s. Chrysalis is best pony.
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P.P.S. Yes she is.
I loved this part of the whole story a lot
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Thank you!
You just reminded me of supreme commander ACU builder
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The what? No clue who/what that is.
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It's a game
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Oh.
Good... let's keep it going