An unstoppable force took me far from home, burdening me with an unwanted power. Now, in a new place, I must learn to control it. The only good thing is that I can finally find happiness.
I assume cutie marks are called mana marks in Spanish?
There were some confusing parts in this chapter such as the quote below you talk about a male cat but you use the word she instead of he. So you may still need an English proofreader.
The one that I miss the most was the male, since she was there the longest, and she was there for me during my worst moments. Thinking about it, it almost seemed that they had much higher consciousness and intelligence.
11527439 I had completely forgotten to answer you at the top, sorry about that. To answer you, yes, they were called that, although I hadn't really thought about it, the name of the brands seemed too... cute for what they are, especially because of how I'm going to treat the story, they may be talking about a serious topic , and let it be said cutie mark... yes, all the drama lowers me.
do you publish it in spanish somewhere?
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Not for now, maybe another day, are you interested?
The Storys is getting good so keep it up this will go far
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Yes, although I am used to reading English, I prefer my native language, Spanish forever... until I learn Gaelic at least!!!
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I will consider it, I don't know where I will upload it, but later, I will upload it in Spanish.
How stressful to wait for the next chapter
I assume cutie marks are called mana marks in Spanish?
There were some confusing parts in this chapter such as the quote below you talk about a male cat but you use the word she instead of he. So you may still need an English proofreader.
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Thanks, I hadn't noticed, that's where I fix it.
If you have any "English proofreader" that you can send me, I would appreciate it.
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Here’s some proofreader groups on fimfiction The Proofreader Group, Proofreaders, Editors, Authors, and Idealists and Looking for proofreader
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Thanks, I'll try to do something in the next chapter, if that keeps causing those kinds of errors, I'll find an editor for those groups.
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I had completely forgotten to answer you at the top, sorry about that.
To answer you, yes, they were called that, although I hadn't really thought about it, the name of the brands seemed too... cute for what they are, especially because of how I'm going to treat the story, they may be talking about a serious topic , and let it be said cutie mark... yes, all the drama lowers me.