Nice chapter as always.

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Thanks

loved this chapter, keep up the good work

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Thank you

Thanks for the chapter! Amazing as always!
And we mark the real beginning of Nick's adventure in Equestria, he will face many villains and challenges from here, I'm very excited to see how it goes from here.

And a small question, how much of the series do you intend to adapt in this story? And will you adapt Equestria Girls and the 2017 movie?
I ask to know what to expect from now on.

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All of them

Me like! Me put in library!

i love it!!! great start to a adventure!!!~

How old is Nick and I'm kind of hoping he be a father figure for Scootaloo

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Nick is 25 and maybe

Rainbow Dash chimed in, her cyan eyes sparkling with excitement. "Hey, Nick, you know what? Scars are like trophies! They tell a story of bravery. You'll have the coolest stories to share!"

Each one makes him -oh- about twenty percent cooler. Nick! Now with realistic battle damage and recovery time.

"Hey, hey! Rainbow Dash here," she exclaimed with a playful wink. "Twilight and Applejack have been raving about you. I can't wait to show you off my amazing skills. Brace yourself for the thrill show of a lifetime!"

Playful wink, eh?

"I received word that you were visiting the hospital, Twilight," Celestia explained, her voice gentle but firm. "I came to make sure everything is alright." As her eyes scanned the room, eventually landing on me. Her usual expression of regal composure subtly shifted to one of curiosity.

Received word from who, I wonder? And Twilight hasn’t informed Celestia about this visitor from another world? Curious.

Tears welled up in my eyes as the weight of my grief resurfaced. But being in the presence of Princess Celestia, who radiated warmth and compassion, gave me the courage to continue sharing my story. "My family meant everything to me," I whispered, my voice quivering. "After their passing, my world changed. It became a place filled with emptiness and reminders of what I had lost. Coming to Equestria, even by accident, gave me a chance to escape that pain for a while."

Great story so far but whoa, talk about being built near water.
I am all for being in touch with your feelings but there ain't no way just being near a warm presence, will make one talk about stuff like this.
No matter how nice a stranger is they are still a stranger.

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Different humans process grief and loss in different ways. There are those who don't speak of the departed and remember them in their memories and their hearts. Others are communal in their grief and seek fri
friends and family to mourn and support each other in their time of mourning.

Therefore, while you may disagree in how the MC exhibits their grieving process, that he chooses to express his grief is, I think not too extreme to be a believable human experience.