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Ebonyglow


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Comments ( 22 )

I love your wholesome fics! This one was really, really good!
Applebloom's high confidence is both hot and great~
And it warmed my heart to know the herd is working!
I am excited for it to be completed~

Another banger!

Zake #3 · Mar 18th, 2023 · · 1 ·

oh my!
its here!

Hoping this doesn't spell the end of your other brand of stories.

Excellent!!


I can't wait to see sweetie's story!!

Now that's a spankable ass!:rainbowwild:

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Not at all, don’t worry

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BOTH of Sweetie Bell's stories.

Comment posted by KjDubya deleted Mar 21st, 2023

Very noice👌

To be honest, I know those cheeks are unrealistic, but I can't help but hear them clap in my head....

Silly Bloom, you knew the CMC were always going to be a package deal. Don't deny your Cutie Mark!

This was a beyond beautiful and sweet part I hope Babs seed joins the herd to.

Awesome! Hope to see Sweetie Belle's soon!

Things that would’ve hurt a fair bit back home now were barely noticeable, and injuries that’d typically cause a broken bone or two just lead to some hefty bruises.

*led :moustache:

“And that’s twenty~” she cooed, placing down the bucket and looking back down at him once more with the same lustful gaze. “Ah win~”

She's eager and clouded with lust today, I see. She forgot that, earlier, she said thirty trees was the target :moustache:

She gripped down on her flanks harder, his arousal beginning to soar.

Is the first "She" meant to be "He"? :moustache:

“You…seemed to nervous before?”

I assume he mean to say "too" :moustache"

Her walls instinctively clenched down on his member as she pressed herself down, caressing his thick with her plump flanks as she hilted him within her.

His thick what? I guess you meant to say something like "monkey dick" or "thickness" there :moustache:

Also, I noticed the amount of time between the two chapters-posted-as-multiple-stories is stated inconsistently:

Anon and Scootaloo had been dating for a few weeks now.

“Ah didn’t realize it at first, but after I saw you two fucking like animals in the orchard a few weeks ago, I couldn’t get it out of my head,” she continued.

Everywhere else says it's been one week :moustache:

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These aren’t really chapters posted as multiple stories, I’ve discussed this with people already - it’s fine and spaced fine.

appreciate the catches though, thanks.

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good catches, amended them

I love this story I actually prefer this version.:scootangel::applecry:

This needs a sequel so bad!

Conclusion when?

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