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This story is a sequel to All That We Become: A Part of the Family
It has almost been a year since Aurelian promised to return to begin passing his magical knowledge and ability on to Celestia. With her impending leave to study under the ancient Alicorn on the horizon, she moves the Gala up in schedule in order to have a grand get together to celebrate all that has changed over the past year.
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Ember and Thorax's romance makes me wanna go read more romance fics cuz it's so warm and sweet
Great story, everyone was getting along, Celestia's worries for her upcoming lessons with Aurelian have been put to rest, and the redeemed trio had a great night along with everypony else. I admittedly was hoping there could be some drama in this story with some pony nobles having doubts and not forgiving the redeemed trio, given how stuck up some nobles are. But, I really like the story for what it is.
It does seem like there is something coming in the future for Equestria and everypony and that Peace won't last much longer before everything breaks loose. But, in the end, we should the peace while it lasts and worry about will come later.
In the end, this was a great story, and I look forward to what comes next!
This was a really good way to converge all the story elements together, by having all the reformed villains at the gala. Everything blended together nicely and it was great to see them all in a more casual setting and just interacting with the characters while they talk about their lives and how much it has improved over time. Great job!
Side note: will we get to see Celestia's training or this anticipated threat coming? Or will this all be left up to speculation? Because I'd love to see Celestia troll Discord with order magic
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I really enjoy writing them together, I kind of want to give them their own story at this point.
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Yes, I want to write stories about those particular events. I'm not entirely sure how I want to format it though, that is to say what elements I want to combine and what ones I think deserve their own story. For this one though I wanted a real slice of life just to set things up and just have some fun interactions and character moments.
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Thanks. I know for sure the reunion of Aurelian, Faye, Aestus and Brayok will be next so they can discuss all that happened to them over the past year. I'm not sure if I want that to be it though or bring in other elements that I want to address.
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Just a funny idea I want to throw out there: what if the "great evil" is the real Grogar but he doesn't realize how overpowered Celestia has become during her training. So much so that she can shatter his bell if he tries using it again
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Funny enough I thought about using Grogar, but I came to that same conclusion, he wouldn't be strong enough. Lol.
An excellent chapter as always, and a wonderful way to hint at the future. Can't wait for the sequel!
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Is the next fic almost ready by now?
Thanks for your wonderful stories! The reformation of the Legion of Doom, the addition of new ancient powerful characters with their own unique experiences and characters, is a wonderful continuation of the original animated series. All stories are wonderful, even if the latter are not as popular as the former.
I'm interested in your fic series. And I would like to see a continuation. But now I can only hope that one day you will return to writing.