I'm Not One For Conversation

Reformed Starlight Glimmer150 stories ·381 members

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Conversation is not Starlight Glimmer's thing, especially after everything she's gone through.

Princess Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship, really wants to help change that. And of course, Spike pitches in, as well.

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Catpaw616

Catpaw616 #1 · Jan 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Twilight winces at seeing the picture. "Let's try not to think negative thoughts, okay?" I roll my eyes and she nods, ashamed as usual.

Seriously, Twilight? Really?

She shakes her head, but then nods. "It's a lot, I know that, but it's what she needs, as well. I just thought she'd be happier about this all."

I almost facepalmed when I saw this quote. Not because what you wrote sucks. The writing is great. But Twilight sounds a bit oblivious and its just aggravating.

Let Starlight heal before you make her do these things before she's obviously not ready, Twilight. Like damn.

Anywho great story as always. Keep it up! ~~The dislikes are going to be so exciting~~

starcoder

starcoder #2 · Jan 17th, 2023 · 1 · ·

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I'm glad you liked it ~~but I like the dislikes more~~

Yeah, I know Twilight isn't the best written character in this story. But I tried to make her act like she's from the actual show; ~~I didn't know that would make her sound that~~ stupid ~~lol~~

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