Capper is in deep trouble with Verko, again. Getting desperate, and hoping to get out of this mess alive, he goes to the one person who might help him out of this mess; Don Vito Corleone, the biggest Crime Boss in Klugetown and puppet master of the city, but has Capper just traded one debt for another?
No death and violence shown but it’s implied.
this is a great story i really want to see how he came to Equestria and how he became the king of Klug town
So a sequel is coming?
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It is. This will be a series of one shots that will take place both before and after Don Vito’s rise
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You will. Soon
The grammar of the dialogue could use some work, and some paragraphs were а bit long, but the concept and pacing made up for them easily. Good read overall!
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Thank you for your critiques, I’m trying to get better at writing, constructive criticism is very much welcomed
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i can't wait
Why isn't there a human tag?
Ditch the wagon and take the cat food...
That'll send a message to the others
Are you sure it's going to be there, I don't want her coming out of the bathroom with her stick in her hoof
Don't worry it'll be there
I get out but they drag me back in...
Cannoli
I want you to rub them out na ya hear ? Use them Chicago Typewriters
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Lol! That’s good!
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The Don thanks you
Welcome to the 'family'
How many stories are going to be in this series?