I never meant to come into the career I'm in. It's a mystery to me as to why it happened. But when all is said and done, I'm glad it did.
I never meant to come into the career I'm in. It's a mystery to me as to why it happened. But when all is said and done, I'm glad it did.
First of all, you need an editor. Now, I can't be much help for that because I have very little experience in editing. I don't know what it is they look for.
Secondly, this is an interesting idea. If this was expanded on, it would be quite a good read for people.
Thirdly, keep practicing! You can only get better!
1545857 Worst case of lag ever ...
1545870 Lol, sorry bro. I just had a ton of things to do. So I finally just sat down and burned through my read later list. Only fifty something more stories to go!
I really like this story so far. Great use of adjectives and such! Upload more, and fast! Oh, and the names are awesomley creative