• Member Since 2nd Jun, 2012
  • offline last seen May 29th, 2022

Innate Enigma


Comments ( 4 )

First of all, you need an editor. Now, I can't be much help for that because I have very little experience in editing. I don't know what it is they look for.

Secondly, this is an interesting idea. If this was expanded on, it would be quite a good read for people.

Thirdly, keep practicing! You can only get better!

:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss:

1545857 Worst case of lag ever ...

1545870 Lol, sorry bro. I just had a ton of things to do. So I finally just sat down and burned through my read later list. Only fifty something more stories to go! :twilightsmile:

I really like this story so far. Great use of adjectives and such! Upload more, and fast! :pinkiehappy: Oh, and the names are awesomley creative :moustache:

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